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A glance line graph demonstrates data about how much consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with predictions until 2030 .

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A glance at the line graph demonstrates data about how much consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with predictions until 2030. (Units are measured by quadrillion). Overall, the consumption of energy increases in each category between 1980 and 2030. However, hydropower is estimated to witness a stay constant in its consumption of fussel fuels. In 1940, around 4 units of nuclear, solar/wind, and hydropower showed a different number of quadrillion or over compared to about 16 of coal and 20 of natural gas. The consumption of fossil fuels at petrol and oil as well as coil rose gradually over a 40 years, reaching just under 40 and 25 units in 2015. By contrast, the figures for natural gas and hydropower registered a mild fluctuations 18 and 3 units until the early 2010s. Looking into the future, a sudden increase in the consumption of petrol and oils units is predicted for coal, with a jump of over 15 in just 10 years from 2020 to 2030. it is thought that around 25 of coal units, while the units for nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower will be level out at 5 and 3 units respectively. Wordcounts: 196
A glance at the line graph demonstrates data about how much
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(Units
are measured
by quadrillion).

Overall
, the
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consumption
of energy increases in each category between 1980 and 2030.
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to witness a stay constant in its
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of
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fussel
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In 1940, around 4
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of nuclear, solar/wind, and hydropower
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number of quadrillion or over compared to about 16 of coal and 20 of natural gas. The
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consumption
of fossil fuels at petrol and oil
as well
as coil rose
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under 40 and 25
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in 2015. By contrast, the figures for natural gas and hydropower registered a mild
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18 and 3
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until the early 2010s.

Looking into the future, a sudden increase in the
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consumption
of petrol and oils
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units
is predicted
for coal, with a jump of over 15 in
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just
10 years from 2020 to 2030.
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that around 25 of coal
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, while the
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for nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower will be level out at 5 and 3
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IELTS academic A glance line graph demonstrates data about how much consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with predictions until 2030.

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