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The diagrams illustrate some changes to a small island which has been developed for tourism.

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The diagrams illustrate some changes to a small island which has been developed for tourism. It is clear that the island is going to change considerably with the introduction of several new features, becoming noticeably modern and enlarged. Looking at the maps in more detail, we can see that small huts are planned to be built to accommodate visitors to the island. The other physical structures that are expected are a reception building, in the middle of the island, and a restaurant to the north of the reception. At the moment, the island is completely bare apart from a few trees. As well as the buildings mentioned above, the soon-to-be-built facilities on the island include a pier, where boats can dock. There is also planned to be a short road linking the pier with the reception and restaurant, and footpaths are intended to connect the huts. Finally, there is projected to be a designated swimming area for tourists off a beach on the western tip of the island.
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modern and enlarged.

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small
huts
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to
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island
. The other physical structures that are
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expected
are a reception building, in the middle of the
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island
, and a restaurant to the north of the reception. At the moment, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
is completely bare apart from a few trees.

As well
as the buildings mentioned above, the
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soon
-to-be-built facilities on the
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island
include a pier, where boats can dock. There is
also
planned to be a short road linking the pier with the reception and restaurant, and footpaths
are intended
to connect the huts.
Finally
, there
is projected
to be a designated swimming area for tourists off a beach on the western tip of the
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island
.
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IELTS academic The diagrams illustrate some changes to a small island which has been developed for tourism.

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168 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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