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The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010. dokp6
The two pie charts compare the household expenses made by the people living in country for two different years. Overall, housing being an primary aspect of everyone's life, people spent most of their budget on housing as well as on food. However, it is clear that transportation and health care are being the lowest spent in both years. To commence with, in 1950, people concentrated more on housing, resulting in the largest proportion at 72% compared to other expenses with just being 28% together. Food is on the second highest at 11. 2% and transportation and health care the least budget.
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spent most of their budget on housing
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that transportation and health care are being the lowest spent in both years.

To commence with, in 1950,
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concentrated more on housing, resulting in the largest proportion at 72% compared to other expenses with
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being 28% together. Food is on the second highest at 11. 2% and transportation and health care the least budget.
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IELTS academic The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.

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