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The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. 0ApaO
The two pie charts illustrates the survey taken by the tourists on Bowen island and differentiated the advantages and disadvantages. The data is calibrated in percentage. Overall, the visitors find the island people is the most advantageous followed by the scenic view. However, the cost of living is the primary drawback for the tourists accompanied by the entertainment. It is clear that the high cost of living is the major disadvantage faced by the visitors at a record high at 50% and food quality being the lowest at 10%.
The two pie charts illustrates the survey taken by the tourists on Bowen island and differentiated the advantages and disadvantages. The data
is calibrated
in percentage.

Overall
, the visitors find the island
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.
is
the most advantageous followed by the scenic view.
However
, the cost of living is the primary drawback for the tourists accompanied by the entertainment.

It is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that the high cost of living is the major disadvantage faced by the visitors at a record high at 50% and food quality being the lowest at 10%.
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IELTS academic The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.

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