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The given line chart clearly depicts information regarding the number of fuel consumption, measured in quadrillion unit, in 6 particularly types at U. S. Energy between history and projection. The 6 types include Petrol and Oil, Coal, Natural Gas, Nuclear, Solar or Wind, and Hydropower. Overall, it can be noticeable that there are 2 general tendencies: an upward and a downward. In deep detail, it can be notice that the quantity of consumed Petrol and Oil, Coal, Natural Gas, Nuclear, and Solar or Wind experienced the upward trend. To be specific, the quantity of Petrol and Oil escalated gradually form 35 in 1980 to 40 in 2005 and then peaked at 50 in 2030. Meanwhile, although the quantity of Coal had increased steadily from approximately 17 to 25 in the first 40 years before surging to 30 at 2030. Likewise, the quantity of Natural Gas climbed moderately from 20 at the beginning to 25 in 2015 and then remained constant at 35 throughout the period. Conversely, the volume of consumed Hydropower underwent the downward trend; there was a fluctuate between 1980 and 2021 and then a level off at approximately 3 throughout the period.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 line chart clearly
 depicts information regarding the number of fuel consumption, measured in quadrillion unit, in 6 particularly
 types at U. S. Energy between history and projection. The 6 types include Petrol and Oil, Coal, Natural Gas, Nuclear, Solar or Wind, and Hydropower. Overall
, it can be noticeable that there are 2 general tendencies: an upward and a downward.

In deep detail, it can be notice that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadabundancecapacityvarietybulksum
quantity
 of consumed Petrol and Oil, Coal, Natural Gas, Nuclear, and Solar or Wind experienced the upward trend. To be specific, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadabundancecapacityvarietybulksum
quantity
 of Petrol and Oil escalated gradually
 form 35 in 1980 to 40 in 2005 and then peaked at 50 in 2030. Meanwhile, although the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadabundancecapacityvarietybulksum
quantity
 of Coal had increased steadily
 from approximately 17 to 25 in the first
 40 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 surging to 30 at 2030. Likewise
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadabundancecapacityvarietybulksum
quantity
 of Natural Gas climbed moderately
 from 20 at the beginning to 25 in 2015 and then remained constant at 35 throughout the period.

Conversely
, the volume of consumed Hydropower underwent the downward trend; there was After 'a', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'fluctuate' is correct. If 'fluctuate' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
a fluctuate
 between 1980 and 2021 and then a level off at approximately 3 throughout the period. 