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Asian passing driving test

Asian passing driving test Q2AJw

The bar chart shows that one Asian both genders in 1980 and 2010 that successfully passed the driving test for. It's clear from the graph that female have the highest percentage. According to what is shown, The women in 1980 had (%48) over men that had (%28) in the same year, also in 1990 (52) per cent of women getting their car driver lisence comparing to (45) per cent of men, While, in 2000 females have impressive increasing differnce in all the four years in rate of passing driving test of (68) percent, but in 2010 the women passed the test was less in value of %62, on the other hand the men have increment (49) percent, although the males have simalar percentage in 2000 and 2010 which is propotion of (49) in their graph. To summerize up, we could say that women bar graph have significant rocking value since 1980 to 2000, except for 2010 that higher than 1990 data bar.

The bar chart This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 that one Asian both genders in 1980 and 2010 that successfully
 passed the driving This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 for. It's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the graph The verb 'have' is plural. Did you mean: "that female has"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?that female has
that female have
 the highest percentage.

According to what is shown
, The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
women
 in 1980 had (%48) over This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 that had (%28) in the same year, also
 in 1990 (52) per cent of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
women
 getting their car driver Possible spelling mistake found.absencelicenseessencesilence
lisence
 comparing to (45) per cent of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
,

While, in 2000 females have impressive increasing Possible spelling mistake found.differencedifférance
differnce
 in all the four years in rate of passing driving This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 of (68) percent, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in 2010 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
women
 passed the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 was less in value of %62, on the other hand
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 have increment (49) percent, although the males have Possible spelling mistake found.similar
simalar
 percentage in 2000 and 2010 which is Possible spelling mistake found.promotionproportionpro potion
propotion
 of (49) in their graph.

To Possible spelling mistake found.summarize
summerize
 up, we could say that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
women
 bar graph have significant rocking value since 1980 to 2000, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :with the exception of
except for
 2010 that higher than 1990 data bar. 