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The diagram provides information about how to recycle plastic bottles.

The diagram provides information about how to recycle plastic bottles. XEAmN
The diagram provides information about how to recycle plastic bottles. Overall, the process consists of nine stages beginning with throwing the waste into a recycling rubbish bin and ending up with producing new products. First of all, people should put garbage that can be reused into the garbage cans with a recycling sign on it. Following this, a truck sends the trash to the recycling centre, where the employees organize the recyclable bottles into one group and others into another. After that, the rubbish is compressed into a block. The cube is then delivered to a machine that crushes them into powder, which is then washed in a vat of water. Next, another machine forms the powder into plastic pellets, which are then heated to raw material. Finally, the raw materials are packed in orderly and companies can use these substances to manufacture new products. Of course, since it is a recycling procedure, the old items can again be thrown into a rubbish bin.
The diagram provides information about how to recycle plastic bottles.
Overall
, the process consists of nine stages beginning with throwing the waste into a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
rubbish bin and ending up with producing new products.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
should put garbage that can
be reused
into the garbage cans with a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sign
on it. Following this, a truck
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sends
the trash to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
, where the employees organize the recyclable bottles into one group
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
and others
into another. After that, the rubbish
is compressed
into a block.

The cube is then delivered to a machine that crushes them into powder, which is then washed in a vat of water.
Next
, another machine forms the powder into plastic pellets, which are then heated to raw material.
Finally
, the raw materials
are packed
in orderly and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
these substances to manufacture new products.
Of course
, since it is a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
procedure, the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
items can again
be thrown
into a rubbish bin.
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IELTS academic The diagram provides information about how to recycle plastic bottles.

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164 words
6.5
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