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Map showing construction in 1995 2005

Map showing construction in 1995 2005 KldA6
The maps compare the layout of reymouth village construction in 1995 and 2005. It witnessed about the dramactic changes. In 1995, most of the Northeast area covered farmland and forest park. On the western side of map there was one housing colony. By noticed on the southern part covered by few shops, adjacent to this, fish markets was their connected via by fishing port. From the eastern side of colonies there was a hotel, which was also opposite to the Cafe. Overall there are noticeable changes in present time. There is construction of tennis and golf club in the northeast direction by demolishing the park and farmland. Development of new colony connects with the old one. Shops and fish Market are replaced by the restaurant and apartments respectively. All the fish market and fishing port are torn. Car parking is built near the hotel in the eastern side. On the other hand Cafe, hotel, housing colonies are remain in their place. The changes appear instrumental in modernizing world.
The maps compare the layout of
reymouth
village construction in 1995 and 2005. It witnessed about the
dramactic
changes
.

In 1995, most of the Northeast area covered farmland and forest park. On the western side of map there was one housing
colony
. By noticed on the southern part covered by few shops, adjacent to this, fish markets was their connected via by fishing port. From the eastern side of
colonies
there was a hotel, which was
also
opposite to the
Cafe
.

Overall
there are noticeable
changes
in present time. There is construction of tennis and golf club in the northeast direction by demolishing the park and farmland. Development of new
colony
connects with the
old
one. Shops and fish Market
are replaced
by the restaurant and apartments
respectively
. All the fish market and fishing port
are torn
. Car parking
is built
near the hotel in the eastern side.

On the other hand
Cafe
, hotel, housing
colonies
are
remain
in their place. The
changes
appear instrumental in modernizing world.
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