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The given pic charts illustrate the proportion of the world population by various regions between 1990 and 2000.

The given pic charts illustrate the proportion of the world population by various regions between 1990 and 2000. KldRw
The given pic charts illustrate the proportion of the world population by various regions between 1990 and 2000. The general overview here is that Asia there was a majority of world population, While the lowest was the others region throughout the period. According to the charts, it is clears that Asia indicated the highest amount of world population in 1990, accounting for 60%. After ten decades, there was a minimal fall of 6% to 54% of its figure which including former Soviet Asia. Similarly, the number of Europe citizens(including Russia) dropped moderately by 11% to 14% in 2000. On the contrary, the figure of population in Africa and Latin America and Caribbean experienced a steady increase to 10% and 8% respectively over the period. It is interesting to note that there were a number of 6% of world population in Middle East and North Africa which this region were not in 1900, and there were a period of stability at 3% and 5% in the number of the others region and Nort America consecutively over the period observed.
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between 1990 and 2000. The general overview here is that Asia there was a majority of
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, While the lowest was the
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throughout the period.

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in 1990, accounting for 60%. After ten decades, there was a minimal fall of 6% to 54% of its figure which including former Soviet Asia.
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in Africa and Latin America and Caribbean experienced a steady increase to 10% and 8%
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over the period. It is interesting to note that there were a number of 6% of
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were not in 1900, and there were a period of stability at 3% and 5% in the number of the others
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IELTS academic The given pic charts illustrate the proportion of the world population by various regions between 1990 and 2000.

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6.0
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