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4. The chart shows the percentage of people accessing news via different media in Vietnam from 2013 to 2017.

4. The chart shows the percentage of people accessing news via different media in Vietnam from 2013 to 2017. l7d2K
The graph illustrates the proportion of Vietnamese people access news via different media reported in 2013, 2015 and 2017. In general, the rate of people use television accounted for the highest percentage in three years. We could be easily observed from the bar chart that people who access news via television reached the largest percentage in Vietnam, fluctuated from nearly 70 to approximately 80 percent. Otherwise, there was a significant rise in Internet users, started with 31 percent in 2013, went up more 9 percent in 2015 and sharply increased about 37 percent in 2017. In comparison with the data of TV and Internet, those of newspapers and radio were completely different. The trend of newspapers readers in Vietnam were gradually decline over the years, ranges from 21 percent to 41 percent. In addition, the number of people listening to the radio is quite stable, with just over 30 percent in three periods.
The graph illustrates the proportion of Vietnamese
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access news via
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media reported in 2013, 2015 and 2017.
In general
, the rate of
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people
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use
television accounted for the highest percentage in three years.

We could be
easily
observed from the bar chart that
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people
who access news via television reached the largest percentage in Vietnam, fluctuated from
nearly
70 to approximately 80
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percent
.
Otherwise
, there was a significant rise in Internet users,
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started
with 31
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in 2013, went up more 9
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percent
in 2015 and
sharply
increased about 37
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percent
in 2017.

In comparison
with the data of TV and Internet, those of newspapers and radio were completely
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different
. The trend of newspapers readers in Vietnam were
gradually
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decline
over the years, ranges from 21
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percent
to 41
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percent
.
In addition
, the number of
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people
listening to the radio is quite stable, with
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over 30
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in three periods.
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IELTS academic 4. The chart shows the percentage of people accessing news via different media in Vietnam from 2013 to 2017.

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