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15 year olds with low literacy levels

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The line graph illustrates the reading and writing competency of children at the age 15 among four countries: Australia, Denmark, Ireland and Sweden over a period of 9 years. Overview, only Denmark represented went down while the other three countries were on rise. Besides that throughout the period Australian teenagers at the age 15 occupy the highest position regarding levels of literacy compared to other countries on the chart. From 2000 to 2003, Denmark stood at under 20 percent in the number of 15 years old with literacy issues. Denmark represented also went down from 17% to 16% but from 2006 to 2009, the speed was reduced. This figure decreased gradually over time and ended the period at roughly 15 percent. The total percentage of this literacy levels in Sweden likewise was approximate 2 percent higher when it was originally documented in 2000. A slight rise was seen in Ireland, which climbed to 15 percent after remaining quite stable from 2000 to 2006.
The line graph illustrates the reading and writing competency of children at the age 15 among four countries: Australia, Denmark, Ireland and Sweden over a period of 9 years.

Overview,
only
Denmark represented went down while the other three countries were on rise.
Besides
that throughout the period Australian
teenagers
at the age 15 occupy the highest position regarding levels of literacy compared to other countries on the chart.

From 2000 to 2003, Denmark stood at under 20 percent in the number of 15 years
old
with literacy issues. Denmark represented
also
went down from 17% to 16%
but
from 2006 to 2009, the speed was
reduced
. This figure decreased
gradually
over time and ended the period at roughly 15 percent.

The total percentage of this literacy levels in Sweden
likewise
was approximate 2 percent higher when it was
originally
documented in 2000. A slight rise was
seen
in Ireland, which climbed to 15 percent after remaining quite stable from 2000 to 2006.
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IELTS academic 15 year olds with low literacy levels

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
163 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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