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The given bar chart illustrates the proportions of male and female teaching members in different faculities of an university in 2012. overall, the academic staff members varied across different faculities. Engineering contains the highest proportion rates of male. In this same category, education was the least percentage. On the other hand, female staff members was the highest in education and lowest in engineering. In arts, women's staff was higher when compared to men's staff. Almost, 60 percentage of women was allocated to arts and it is around 42 percent for men. When coming to business, it was around 62 percent of male staff and it was close to 38 percentage of female staff. In education, the male staff members was almost 78 percent which is the highest proportion rates for this category and 22 percent of male staff were assigned. In engineering, 82% of the male staff was assigned in that particular academic year, which is the highest assignment rate for this gender group. In contrast, only 18% of women were there in this faculity. Law and science faculity members of both genders were relatively similar. Finally, 52 percent of the female staff were present in medicine department and it was around 48 percent for female academic staff members.

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