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talk about the changes in the family structure and the problems modern families encounter in the UAE and the Gulf region.

talk about the changes in the family structure and the problems modern families encounter in the UAE and the Gulf region. 73NAA
Modern family structure has been changed, compared to in the past. In recent years, the family structure in the Gulf countries and especially in the UAE has changed, These family structures changes affect the family members' relationship negatively and lead to many consequences and a drop in the closeness between family members, making it a disconnected family. The family structure in the UAE and Gulf countries has changed due to, increase in the divorce rate, remarriages, and an increase in marriage requirements. In this paragraph, I will talk about the changes in the family structure and the problems modern families encounter in the UAE and the Gulf region.
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has been
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, compared to in the past. In recent years, the
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in the Gulf countries and
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in the UAE has
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,

These
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structures
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affect the
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members' relationship
negatively
and lead to
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many
consequences and a drop in the closeness between
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family
members, making it a disconnected
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family
. The
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family
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structure
in the UAE and Gulf countries has
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changed
due to, increase in the divorce rate, remarriages, and an increase in marriage requirements. In this paragraph, I will talk about the
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changes
in the
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family
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and the problems modern
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encounter in the UAE and the Gulf region.
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IELTS speaking talk about the changes in the family structure and the problems modern families encounter in the UAE and the Gulf region.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
108 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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