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Describe about a Bussiness Person

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Thai Van Linh is abusinessman Vietnamese. She is currently an investor and consultant supporting start-ups. She was born on April 10, 1977 in District 5, Ho Chi Minh City. At the age of 2, she and her motherto the US immigrated. She graduated with a degree in General Business Administration from the University of Southern California in 1999. After that, she studied for a master's degree in Business Administration majoring in finance at the University of Pennsylvania in 2006. In 2012, she worked as a Director forfund DFJ VinaCapital. She is a powerful woman, always trying and determined to achieve. goal in life. Until 2012, she founded a start-up called The One Couture that specializes in tailoring wedding dresses to the bride's measurements and designs. In 2015, Thai Van Linh was the CEO and founder of the start-up Rita Phil, specializing in designing and manufacturing skirts according to measurements. In December 2018, Ms. Linh decided to join VinGroup and was appointed CEO of Vingroup Ventures Joint Stock Company.
Thai Van
Linh is
abusinessman
Vietnamese. She is
currently
an investor and consultant supporting
start
-ups. She
was born
on April 10,
1977
in District 5, Ho Chi Minh City. At the age of 2, she and her
motherto
the US immigrated. She graduated with a degree
in General
Business Administration from the University of Southern California in 1999. After that, she studied for a master's degree in Business Administration majoring in finance at the University of Pennsylvania in 2006. In 2012, she worked as a Director
forfund
DFJ
VinaCapital
. She is a powerful woman, always trying and determined to achieve.
goal
in life. Until 2012, she founded a
start
-up called The One Couture that specializes in tailoring wedding dresses to the bride's measurements and designs. In 2015, Thai Van
Linh
was the CEO and founder of the
start
-up Rita Phil, specializing in designing and manufacturing skirts according to measurements. In December 2018, Ms.
Linh
decided to
join
VinGroup
and
was appointed
CEO of
Vingroup
Ventures Joint Stock
Company
.
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