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How you recover from disappointment?

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In this world, no one thinks that they are blissed and they might start complaining about their lives right after finishing greetings when you meet them. In addition, majority of the people have no way to tackle to those irksome moments and the rigors of life. On the other hand, it's extremely important to be glad, successful and full of energy. I would like to shed light on some vital points which can help you live like a king. Additionally, positivity is vitally important in daily life for almost every one. Especially, those who perpetually face losses, challenges and stresses. Indeed, it's the only way whereby you dare tackle the problems successfully; for example, you lost your best mate and you are not to supposed to think he was the only one whom I fall back on anytime. I can't find another one even if I spend years; In this case, you are totally incorrect. Instead, you have to think positively and try to find others. Once again, you have to make friends and start working on things with positive mind, sincerely and from the core of your heart. Your sincerity and enthusiasm and positivity will lead to success. To cope with anxiety and depression in a successful and resilient way, you had better start taking exercise; for instance, we are supposed to allocate one or one half hour for exercise every day. As I experienced that I lost all stress and anxiety when I was taking exercise and I was so good at waking up and doing other activities like, cricket, football, tennis and so on. Into the bargain, having exercise made me feel chuffed to bits and all the irksome moments that I had, immediately went away. Also, self-control is essential which helps feel stronger and resolve the problems. You lost someone whom you loved so much. Now, you are not supposed to think that if there is not her or him, I can not live. You have to control yourself and tend to live better than you did in the past. Overall, we have to tackle the problems as successfully, bravely and determinedly as possible and never ever fall back on others. We should continue life better than we did before. We are supposed to go for those things which help us live in a great, successful, calm fashion. There are a great deal of ways to make life unstressed, while the point I mentioned led me to unstressed life.
In this world, no one
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that they are
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blissed and
they might
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start
complaining about their
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lives
right
after finishing greetings when you
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meet
them.

In addition
,
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majority of
the
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people
have no way to tackle to those irksome moments and the rigors of
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life
. On the
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other
hand, it's
extremely
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important
to be glad, successful and full of energy.

I would like to shed light on
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some
vital points which can
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help
you
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live
like a king.

Additionally
, positivity is
vitally
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important
in daily
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life
for almost every one.
Especially
, those who
perpetually
face losses, challenges and
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stresses
.
Indeed
, it's the
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only
way whereby you dare tackle the problems
successfully
;
for example
, you lost your best mate and you are not to
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supposed
to
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think
he was the
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only
one whom I fall back on anytime. I can't find another one even if I spend years;
In this case
, you are
totally
incorrect.
Instead
, you
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have to
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think
positively
and try to find others. Once again, you
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have to
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make
friends and
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start
working on things with
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positive
mind,
sincerely
and from the core of your heart. Your sincerity and enthusiasm and positivity will lead to success.

To cope with anxiety and depression in a successful and resilient way, you had better
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start
taking
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exercise
;
for instance
, we are
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supposed
to allocate one or one half hour for
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exercise
every day. As I experienced that I lost all
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stress
and anxiety when I was taking
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exercise
and I was
so
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good
at waking up and doing
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other
activities like, cricket, football, tennis and
so
on.

Into the bargain, having
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exercise
made me feel chuffed to bits and all the irksome moments that I had, immediately went away.

Also
, self-control is essential which
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helps
feel stronger and resolve the problems. You lost someone whom you
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loved
so
much.
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Now
, you are not
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supposed
to
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think
that if there is not her or him, I can not
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live
. You
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have to
control yourself and tend to
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live
better than you did in the past.

Overall
, we
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have to
tackle the problems as
successfully
,
bravely
and
determinedly
as possible and never ever fall back on others. We should continue
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life
better than we did
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before
. We are
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supposed
to go for those things which
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help
us
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live
in a great, successful, calm fashion.

There are a great
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of ways to
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life
unstressed, while the point I mentioned led me to unstressed
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life
.
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IELTS speaking How you recover from disappointment?

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