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Web talk with a rich guy

Web talk with a rich guy 3LObw

_Alright I'm hear with ben _. . . . . . . . . _ben? _what? Oh, right _so there is a question for you how did you get rich you are just a 22 year young boy so _so you just need to believe the beauty of real estate _can you define it clearly _actually the average transaction goes into thousands of dollars in commission on every sale. only by the biggest expense of families you have to meet the need _oh the secret key is home _exactly it is a financial service when it comes the earn money it can be as attractive as possible and one more if you wanna to involve. . . _oh oh pleas say maybe one day _ OK I'm hear and I won't run away you need seed money to become a landlord just like me _ummm like this guy _oh absolutely not who is he a proud king _how about this one _yeah sounds great but there is a point if you don't have the seed money you can become an agent, manager and so on _thank you my lord

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_Possible spelling mistake found.Benbebeenmentenban
ben
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_what? Oh, right


_so there is a question for you how did you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 rich you are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
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22 year
 young boy so


_so you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 need to believe the beauty of real estate

_can you define it clearly


_actually
 the average transaction goes into thousands of dollars in commission on every sale. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOnly
only
 by the biggest expense of families you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 the need

_oh the secret key is home

_exactly
 it is a financial service when it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'earn' is correct. If 'earn' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the earn
 money it can be as attractive as possible and one more if you wanna to involve. Don't put a space before the full stop.
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Don't put a space before the full stop.
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_oh oh pleas say maybe one day

_ OK I'm Consider using a past participle here: "heard".heard
hear
 and I won't run away you need seed money to become a landlord This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 like me

_Possible spelling mistake found.MMMUIMMUMMum mm
ummm
 like this guy

_oh absolutely
 not who is he a proud king

_how about this one

_yeah sounds great This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there is a point if you don't have the seed money you can become an agent, manager and so
 on

_thank you my lord