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dont know who God would have made for me

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Right now I don’t know on which corner of Earth you are I don’t know who you are, with whom you are, I don’t know that you are happy or sad, poor or rich, single or mingle, I don’t know anything about u still each and everyday I dream for you Still everyday I care for you, everyday I wish for you You’re imagination give me bliss I don’t know that you going to love going to hate me I don’t know what nature you have, I don’t know what you like and what you dislike, I don’t know anything about you still everyday I pray to God to make you happy and healthy I don’t know what kind of love is this still everyday I wish for you, I care for you and want to give more love I don’t know when we will meet and if its happen so I‘ll be able to recognize you or not I don’t know anything but what I know is I’m alway going to love you no matter you love me or hate me everyday your imagination bliss my heart and pour it with true feeling my love for you is to give aboundance, and don’t except the same I just want to give my love to somebody
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who you are, with whom you are,

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IELTS speaking dont know who God would have made for me

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11 paragraphs
215 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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