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Write a paragraph of MINIMUM 60 words about : • What makes you laugh? • When last did you laugh? Why? • Do you think laughter is good for our health? Why?

Write a paragraph of MINIMUM 60 words about: • What makes you laugh? • When last did you laugh? Why? • Do you think laughter is good for our health? Why? L9VlG
These days we see a lot of people laughing at many things, we may find that the reason they laugh is not funny to us but they laugh because they find it funny, and when we see someone laughing we ask ourselves “what makes me laugh? ”, “Is laughter good for our health? Why? ”, “When was the last time I laughed and why? ”. In one hand, “what makes me laugh? ” in my opinion, there are many reasons that make us laugh. To illustrate, my favorite movie, the Tom and Jerry movie, is very funny. It tells about a cat and a mouse who do not love each other, but they try to protect each other, and they get into many funny problems. Also family conversations make us laugh, and if there is a small child or cat in the family it will be very funny. On the other hand, “Is laughter good for our health? Why? i believe that laughter is very beneficial for our health, as laughter increases the hormone of happiness in the body and helps relieve pain, also laughter helps reduce cholesterol in the body, a hormone that lowers the body's immune response, in addition, laughter helps facilitate our daily routine. “When was the last time you laughed and why? ”. Actually, I laughed an hour ago when I watched the Tom and Jerry movie again with my little brother. Tom and Jerry is a series of 160 episodes, and when they showed the movie the scene that we laughed at was that, a dog asked Tom and Jerry about their names and they spoke their names together, my name is Tom, my name is Jerry and then they shocked because they didn't know they were talking and told each other you are talking! Tom said sure I'm talking as you think I'm dumb? Why didn't you spoke before? Jerry said I didn't think there was anything I would say and thought you understand it and there still is it. It was a very funny movie and I watched it more than once. In conclusion, after careful analysis of all the questions, I believe that if we laugh daily, our day will be better and the day will end quickly because Laughter makes a person better and makes him feel more happy.
These days we
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a lot of
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laughing at
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many
things, we may find that the reason they
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is not
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to us
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but
they
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laugh
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because
they find it
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funny
, and when we
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see
someone laughing we ask ourselves “what
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makes
me
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laugh
? ”, “Is
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laughter
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good
for our health? Why? ”, “When was the last time I
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laughed
and why? ”.

In one hand, “what
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makes
me
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laugh
? ”

in my opinion, there are
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many
reasons that
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make
us laugh.

To illustrate, my favorite
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movie
, the Tom and Jerry
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movie
, is
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very
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funny
. It
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tells
about a cat and a mouse who do not
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love
each
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other
,
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but
they try to protect each
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other
, and they
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get
into
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many
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funny
problems.
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Also
family conversations
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make
us
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laugh
, and if there is a
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small
child or cat in the family it will be
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very
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funny
.

On the
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hand, “Is
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laughter
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good
for our health? Why?
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i
believe that
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laughter
is
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very
beneficial for our health, as
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laughter
increases the hormone of happiness in the body and
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helps
relieve pain,
also
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laughter
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helps
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reduce
cholesterol in the body, a hormone that lowers the body's immune response,
in addition
,
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laughter
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helps
facilitate our daily routine.

“When was the last time you
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laughed
and why? ”.

Actually
, I
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laughed
an hour ago when I
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watched
the Tom and Jerry
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movie
again with my
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little
brother. Tom and Jerry is a series of 160 episodes, and when they
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showed
the
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movie
the scene that we
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laughed
at was that, a dog asked Tom and Jerry about their
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names and
they spoke their
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names
together, my
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name
is Tom, my
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name
is
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Jerry and
then they shocked
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because
they didn't know they were talking and
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told
each
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other
you are talking! Tom said sure I'm talking as you
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think
I'm dumb? Why didn't you spoke
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? Jerry said I didn't
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think
there was anything I would say and
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thought
you understand it and there
still
is it. It was a
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very
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funny
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movie
and I
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watched
it more than once.

In conclusion
, after careful analysis of all the questions, I believe that if we
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laugh
daily, our day will be better and the day will
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end
quickly
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because
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Laughter
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makes
a person better and
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makes
him feel more happy.
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IELTS speaking Write a paragraph of MINIMUM 60 words about: • What makes you laugh? • When last did you laugh? Why? • Do you think laughter is good for our health? Why?

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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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