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why peole need to use Ngay Mai

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- “Ngay Mai Hotline” Establish a Positioning like a psychological consultation, service, but not a community. - People are new to the concept of "mental health" and people just realized that they have mental health problems still need an easier way to access and mass connection. - More than a place to consult or provide information, what they want is a community to share and listen to their story, problems. - People need a more important reason to started to use the "Ngay Mai Hotline".
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IELTS speaking why peole need to use Ngay Mai

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4 paragraphs
85 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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