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TO MANY VIETNAMESE PEOPLE, CHOOSING THE BEST INSTITUTION FOR THEIR CHILDREN TO STUDY IS AN IMPORTANT ISSUE. MANY PEOPLE SEND THEIR CHILDREN TO UNIVERSITIES IN OTHER COUNTRIES WHILE OTHERS PREFER THEIR CHILDREN TO STUDY AT LOCAL INSTITUTIONS.

TO MANY VIETNAMESE PEOPLE, CHOOSING THE BEST INSTITUTION FOR THEIR CHILDREN TO STUDY IS AN IMPORTANT ISSUE. MANY PEOPLE SEND THEIR CHILDREN TO UNIVERSITIES IN OTHER COUNTRIES WHILE OTHERS PREFER THEIR CHILDREN TO STUDY AT LOCAL INSTITUTIONS. 8dPGw
“Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world. ” (Yadav & Puja, 2019). Today, education is the most important role in our life. It is a key to resolving any issues because It assists people in recognizing their own capabilities as well as limits. For this reason, choosing the right school for our children is extremely necessery to promote them for showing their ability (Ahmed & E. , 2013). In this case, too many Vietnamese people, send their children to universities in other countries while others prefer their children to study at local institutions. However, I believe that studying abroad will be the best choice of parents for their children mainly because childrens will have chance to experience different styles of education, improve their language skills, impress their employer and develope their confident. First, studying abroad provides students with the opportunity to study in a variety of educational environments (Thorne, 2012). Every nation has its own teaching style. Studying abroad will help students broaden their scholastic views and acquire the ability to adapt to different educational environments. Moreover, when students enrolling in a study abroad program will allow them to see an aspect of their field that they may not have seen before. They will discover that thoroughly immersing themself in your host country's educational system is a fantastic opportunity to truly experience and understand the people, history, and lifestyle. For this reason, choosing study abroad and selecting the correct institution is critical. Second, study abroad helps students improve their language skills (Walton, 2020). While learning a language in class is enjoyable, putting it to use in the real world is a completely other experience. Due to students who study abroad learning the language on a daily basis, they are more likely to learn it quickly and they are also be able to acquire language and vocabulary that they would not have learned in class and allowing them to talk like a native people. Moreover, improving your children language abilities when they study abroad might also help them advance in their work. Because of several jobs in international affairs and politics need fluency in a second language. So, this is one of the best reason to let your children study abroad than local universities. Third, studying abroad can help your children impress their employers and increase their competitiveness in the labor market (STAFF, 2019). It allows your children to demonstrate and potential and present employers that your children have the inquisitive mind, inventiveness, and ambition required to adjust to a new situation. However, there are many businesses prefer graduates with study experience in abroad. According to a latest survey, 64% of companies value study abroad program, and 92% seek for transferrable qualities that are often obtained from the study experience abroad, such as adaptability and sovle to numerous issues (Overseas, 2021). “Students who study abroad offer more to the workplace than those who don’t, ” Lombardi says. Studying abroad may be a great resume builder, demonstrating prospective companies that you will have the abilities they require to fulfill their business objectives. Last but not least, study abroad help your children develope their confident (Martin-Rubió & Maria, 2018). By diving deeper in another culture, your children will discover vital life skills necessary for personal development, such as individuality and flexibility. These abilities can increase your children confidence in both their personal and social development. Studying abroad might be intimidating, but the obstacles they face will help your children grow as a person. Your children will discover that they can frequently flourish in new, unexpected conditions, and they will increase their communication abilities by learning a new language, which will help they boost their self-confidence even more. Moreover, quickly acclimating to their new circumstances can aid in the development of self-reliance and resilience. In conclusion, parents should send their children to universities in other countries because childrens will have chance to experience different styles of education, improve their language skills, impress their employer and develope their confident. To sum up, this will be the right choice for your children to help them have a better life and it may bring to them a lot of chance to creat a brighten future.
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people
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necessery
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2013).
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children
to universities in
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other
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study
at local institutions.
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with the opportunity to
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in a variety of educational environments (Thorne, 2012). Every nation has its
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own
teaching style.
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will
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help
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students
broaden their scholastic views and acquire the
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different
educational environments.
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themself
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people
, history, and lifestyle.
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study
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and selecting the correct institution is critical.

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their
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language
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skills
(Walton, 2020). While learning a
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language
in
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class
is enjoyable, putting it to
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use
in the real world is a completely
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other
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who
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study
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learning the
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on a daily basis, they are more likely to learn it
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language
.
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children
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study
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abroad
than local universities.

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can
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your
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children
impress their
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employers
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allows
your
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children
to demonstrate and potential and present
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that your
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have the inquisitive mind, inventiveness, and ambition required to adjust to a
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new
situation.
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businesses prefer graduates with
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. According to
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companies
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study
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abroad
program, and 92% seek for
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transferrable
qualities that are
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often
obtained from the
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study
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experience
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, such as adaptability and
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to numerous issues (Overseas, 2021).
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“Students
who
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study
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abroad
offer more to the workplace than those who don’t,
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”
Lombardi says.
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Studying
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abroad
may be a great resume builder, demonstrating prospective
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companies
that you will have the
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abilities
they require to fulfill their business objectives.

Last
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not least,
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study
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help
your
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children
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develope
their confident (
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Martin-Rubió
& Maria, 2018). By diving deeper in another culture, your
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children
will discover vital life
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skills
necessary for personal development, such as individuality and flexibility. These
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abilities
can increase your
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children
confidence in both their personal and social development.
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Studying
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abroad
might be intimidating,
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but
the obstacles they face will
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your
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children
grow as a person. Your
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children
will discover that they can
frequently
flourish in
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, unexpected conditions, and they will increase their communication
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abilities
by learning a
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new
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language
, which will
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help
they boost their self-confidence even more.
Moreover
,
quickly
acclimating to their
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new
circumstances can aid in the development of self-reliance and resilience.

In conclusion
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their
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children
to universities in
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other
countries
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childrens will
have chance to
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experience
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different
styles of
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education
,
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improve
their
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language
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skills
, impress their
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employer
and
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develope
their confident.
To sum up
, this will be the
right
choice for your
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children
to
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help
them have a better life and it may bring to them
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a lot of
chance to
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creat
a
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brighten
future.
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IELTS speaking TO MANY VIETNAMESE PEOPLE, CHOOSING THE BEST INSTITUTION FOR THEIR CHILDREN TO STUDY IS AN IMPORTANT ISSUE. MANY PEOPLE SEND THEIR CHILDREN TO UNIVERSITIES IN OTHER COUNTRIES WHILE OTHERS PREFER THEIR CHILDREN TO STUDY AT LOCAL INSTITUTIONS.

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