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My favorite meal in the evenings

My favorite meal in the evenings Awq6x
I always go to bed late, thus I always wake up late. As a result, I always get up about noon or in the afternoon. However I believe that sleeping late and missing breakfast are detrimental for your health, therefore I encourage you not to do those things. Because breakfast is really vital for us: in fact, I believe breakfast in the most important meal of the day, since it provides us with more energy to work. I believe that everyone enjoys eating, this includes me. Dinner is my favorite meal, because I’ll be able to enjoy supper with my family. As previously said, I get up too late, thus I miss out on breakfast and lunch with my loved ones. My mum usually cooks, she is an excellent cook. On Sunday, my family would eat different things than on weekdays such as barbecue, hot pot and many more. That makes me really delighted.
I always go to bed
late
,
thus
I always wake up
late
.
As a result
, I always
get
up about noon or in the afternoon.
However
I believe that sleeping
late
and missing
breakfast
are detrimental for your health,
therefore
I encourage you not to do those things.
Because
breakfast
is
really
vital for us: in fact, I believe
breakfast
in the most
important
meal of the day, since it provides us with more energy to work. I believe that everyone enjoys eating, this includes me.

Dinner is my favorite meal,
because
I’ll be able to enjoy supper with my family. As previously said, I
get
up too
late
,
thus
I miss out on
breakfast
and lunch with my
loved
ones. My mum
usually
cooks, she is an excellent cook. On Sunday, my family would eat
different
things than on weekdays such as barbecue, hot pot and
many
more. That
makes
me
really
delighted.
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IELTS speaking My favorite meal in the evenings

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2 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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