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My favorite meal in the evenings

My favorite meal in the evenings Awq6x

I always go to bed late, thus I always wake up late. As a result, I always get up about noon or in the afternoon. However I believe that sleeping late and missing breakfast are detrimental for your health, therefore I encourage you not to do those things. Because breakfast is really vital for us: in fact, I believe breakfast in the most important meal of the day, since it provides us with more energy to work. I believe that everyone enjoys eating, this includes me. Dinner is my favorite meal, because I’ll be able to enjoy supper with my family. As previously said, I get up too late, thus I miss out on breakfast and lunch with my loved ones. My mum usually cooks, she is an excellent cook. On Sunday, my family would eat different things than on weekdays such as barbecue, hot pot and many more. That makes me really delighted.

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late
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get
 up about noon or in the afternoon. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
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breakfast
 are detrimental for your health, therefore
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Because
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breakfast
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important
 meal of the day, since it provides us with more energy to work. I believe that everyone enjoys eating, this includes me.

Dinner is my favorite meal, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I’ll be able to enjoy supper with my family. As previously said, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 up too You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslowlast-minute
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, thus
 I miss out on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbrunch
breakfast
 and lunch with my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
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different
 things than on weekdays such as barbecue, hot pot and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
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