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Descibe one of your best friends.

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His voice seemed to be echoing inside my head. My chest was tight and I felt breathless, not able to move. My ears were burning. Everything seemed distant. It seemed that I was no longer in my body, but somewhere far far away, floating amongst the stars and beyond, somewhere beyond the reach of the radioactive moon and the father planet. My eyes were blind and my mind and body and soul were numb and dull and lifeless and oh so very cold. I wanted to cry, but no tears came.
His voice seemed to be echoing inside my head. My chest was tight and I felt breathless, not able to
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move
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My ears were burning. Everything seemed distant. It seemed that I was no longer in my body,
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but
somewhere
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far far
away, floating amongst the stars and beyond, somewhere beyond the reach of the radioactive moon and the father planet. My eyes were blind and my mind and body and soul were numb and dull and lifeless and oh
so
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very
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cold
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I wanted to cry,
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but
no tears came.
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IELTS speaking Descibe one of your best friends.

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3 paragraphs
91 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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