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There is no place like home". It means, we have a lot of places to pay a visit. But one place we can go back to, and that is home

There is no place like home". It means, we have a lot of places to pay a visit. But one place we can go back to, and that is home J36YD
"There is no place like home". It means, we have a lot of places to pay a visit. But one place we can go back to, and that is home. I'm living in a nuclear family. However, I do not like it much, living in an extended family is my cup of tea because I can be spent a lot of love, attention and the relationship between members in my family becomes more close-knit. There are five rooms in totally: a living room, kitchen, bathroom, and two bedrooms. The largest room is the living room because that is the place where my family gathers to watch television, tell about funny stories, and it has enough space to decorate houseplant, bonsai pot, and aquarium. The smallest room is the bathroom because it’s a waste of space to take up so much area in there. The room I like most is my bedroom as I mostly spend my time in here where I can let my hair down, study, and sleep whenever I want.
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, I do not like it much,
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in an extended
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is my cup of tea
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I can
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a lot of
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love
, attention and the relationship between members in my
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family
becomes more close-knit. There are five
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in
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, kitchen, bathroom, and two bedrooms. The largest
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is the
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where my
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gathers to
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television,
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stories, and it has
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space to decorate houseplant, bonsai pot, and aquarium. The smallest
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room
is the bathroom
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because
it’s a waste of space to take up
so
much area in there.
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I like most is my bedroom as I
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spend my time in here where I can
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let
my hair down, study, and sleep whenever I want.
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IELTS speaking There is no place like home". It means, we have a lot of places to pay a visit. But one place we can go back to, and that is home

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5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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