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The role of music in life

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During our lives, every single of us confronts tough challenges that we do not know how to handle. In these situations, we need to remove tension, so nothing will help us except music. Music affects the functionality of our mind and improves its performance. As a result, we can think better and analyze every aspect of issues. Music plays an important role in our lives, without it, problems will not be solved appropriately, and we have a strange deficiency in every second of our life.
During our
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lives
, every single of us confronts tough challenges that we do not know how to handle. In these situations, we need to remove tension,
so
nothing will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
us except music.

Music affects the functionality of our mind and
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improves
its performance.
As a result
, we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
better and analyze every aspect of issues.

Music plays an
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important
role in our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
, without it, problems will not
be solved
appropriately
, and we have a strange deficiency in every second of our life.
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IELTS speaking The role of music in life

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3 paragraphs
85 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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