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Situation 1: You and your friend from high-school are now studying at different universities, so you don’t get to spend much time with each other. You would like to take up a sport together on the weekend as a way to stay fit and bond.

Situation 1: You and your friend from high-school are now studying at different universities, so you don’t get to spend much time with each other. You would like to take up a sport together on the weekend as a way to stay fit and bond. OwPjM
A: hi…. Long time no see. How are you doing? B: hmm. . Nice to see you again. I'm fine. How about you? A: Really terrible, thanks for asking. These days, I'm too busy with school, so I rarely see each other. B: uhh! That's right because my study time with yours is too different. Ah! but I'm free here, I don't know if you are busy? A: hmm… not sure what day are you free? Can you let me know? If I'm free, we can meet. B: ah! I forgot to tell you this Thursday. So are you free? A: uhm…let me see. actually I’m sorry, but I'm busy with school this Thursday? Don't know if you have any free days? B: well. . . that's for another day. Oh! I forgot I'm free this weekend too but I wonder if you're free? A: Of course I'll be free since I don't have classes on weekends. B: is that so! So do you want to join the sport with me? A: haha… I was also going to tell you to join in improving our health together and I would like to meet you too. B: Then why didn't you say earlier. hmm… A: haha. I forgot because there was so much I needed to do. B: uhm… me too. What sport are we doing together? According to me, I'm going to invite you to participate in basketball, I don't know how you are? A: I think that's fine, but I want us to play racquet together because playing racquet also helps us stay healthy. Besides, it can help you and I increase our height and train us to be more alert. B: uhm. So what time do we go? A: I think we should go in the morning because morning exercise gives us more energy to work all day. B: fine. then go at 8 o'clock. What do you think? A: Oh! No, I think we should get up early to go. In my opinion, we should leave at 6 o'clock and after practice, have breakfast, have coffee and go home. B: okay. That's okay, but that day you came to drive me. A: yes. That morning you get ready and then I will come and go with you. I haven't been with you for a long time. I'm sure there's a lot to talk about. B: haha…that's it. See you again at the weekend. Now I have to continue my studies. A: uhm… goodbye. Don’t forgot! See you at the weekend. B: You’d better belive it! goodbye… See you again.
A: hi…. Long
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time
no
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see
. How are you doing?

B: hmm.
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.
Nice to
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see
you again. I'm fine. How about you?

A:
Really
terrible, thanks for asking. These days, I'm too busy with school,
so
I rarely
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see
each other.

B:
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uhh
! That's
right
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because
my study
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time
with yours is too
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different
.

Ah!
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but
I'm
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free
here, I
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don't
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know
if you are busy?

A: hmm… not sure what day are you
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free
? Can you
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let
me
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know
? If I'm
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free
, we can
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meet
.

B: ah! I forgot to
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tell
you this Thursday.
So
are you free?

A:
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uhm
…
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let
me
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see
.
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actually
I’m sorry,
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but
I'm busy with school this Thursday?
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Don't
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know
if you have any
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free
days?

B:
well
.
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.
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.
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that
's for another day.

Oh! I forgot I'm
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free
this weekend too
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but
I wonder if you're free?

A:
Of course
I'll be
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free
since I
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don't
have classes on weekends.

B: is that
so
!
So
do you want to
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join
the sport with me?

A: haha… I was
also
going to
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tell
you to
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join
in improving our health together and I would like to
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meet
you too.

B: Then why didn't you say earlier.
Interjections are usually punctuated.
hmm
…

A: haha. I forgot
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because
there was
so
much I needed to do.

B:
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uhm
… me too. What sport are we doing together?
This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using "in my opinion" or "I think".
According to me
, I'm going to invite you to participate in basketball, I
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don't
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know
how you are?

A: I
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think
that's fine,
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but
I want us to play racquet together
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because
playing racquet
also
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helps
us stay healthy.
Besides
, it can
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help
you and I increase our height and train us to be more alert.

B:
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uhm
.
So
what
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time
do we go?

A: I
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think
we should go in the morning
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because
morning exercise gives us more energy to work all day.

B: fine.
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then
go at 8 o'clock. What do you
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think
?

A: Oh! No, I
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think
we should
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get
up early to go. In my opinion, we should
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leave
at 6 o'clock and after practice, have breakfast, have coffee and go home.

B: okay. That's okay,
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but
that day you came to drive me.

A: yes. That morning you
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get
ready and then I will
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come
and
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go with
you. I haven't been with you for a long
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time
. I'm sure there's a lot to talk about.

B: haha…that's it.
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See
you again
The phrase 'at the weekend' is a British English expression, which is used the same way as "on the weekend" in American English.
at the weekend
.
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Now
I
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have to
continue my studies.

A:
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uhm
… goodbye. Don’t forgot!
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See
you
The phrase 'at the weekend' is a British English expression, which is used the same way as "on the weekend" in American English.
at the weekend
.

B: You’d better
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belive
it!
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goodbye
…
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See
you again.
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IELTS speaking Situation 1: You and your friend from high-school are now studying at different universities, so you don’t get to spend much time with each other. You would like to take up a sport together on the weekend as a way to stay fit and bond.

Speaking
  American English
25 paragraphs
432 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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