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He is smiling. He was shut the door. He was proud to be good. He was too sleepy. He was throw that thing into this garbage. Everything was very loud.

He is smiling. He was shut the door. He was proud to be good. He was too sleepy. He was throw that thing into this garbage. Everything was very loud. pe6Vw
He is smiling. He was shut the door. He was proud to be good. He was too sleepy. He was throw that thing into this garbage. Everything was very loud. The department store is over there The school is between the post office and the supermarket The post office is across from the library The department store is between the movie theater and the library. I want to be a postal worker. I want to be a seller I want to be a vet I want to be a cashier I want to be a server I want to be a librarian
He is smiling.

He
was shut
the door.

He
was proud to be
good
.

He
was too sleepy.

He
was throw that thing into this garbage.

Everything was
very
loud. The department store is over there

The school is between the post office and the
supermarket


The post office is across from the library

The department store is between the movie theater and the library.

I
want
to be a postal worker.

I
want
to be a seller

I
want
to be a vet

I
want
to be a cashier

I
want
to be a server

I
want
to be a librarian
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IELTS speaking He is smiling. He was shut the door. He was proud to be good. He was too sleepy. He was throw that thing into this garbage. Everything was very loud.

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101 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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