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Food that is native or not

Food that is native or not AgdDM

As matter of fact, people do not have to eat on specific food, which includes their country food and non-native *Food*, *what is existed* in their homeland. instead, the only significant point is to have all required nutritional elements which is necessary for body. *becuase* in any country some foods are not healthy *though* people eat them a lot. in addition, octups are eaten too often in East-Asian countries which is so dangerous. *We can replace any food that arr not native, and are deeply healthy such as grilled chicken than fastfood. * *East* healthy *, * be healthy.

As matter of fact, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 do not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 eat on specific You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
, which includes their country You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 and non-native *FooReplace by the typographical symbol.d×,d·,
d*,
 *what is existed
* in their homeland. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterInstead
instead
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 significant point is to have all required nutritional elements which is necessary for body. *Possible spelling mistake found.because
becuase
* in any country This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
foods
 are not You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvigoroustoughnormalathletichealthfulhearty
healthy
 *though* This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 eat them a lot. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 addition, Possible spelling mistake found.occursoccupycupscoupsoctopussetups
octups
are eaten
 too This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 in East-Asian countries which is so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
. *We can replace any You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 that arr not native, and are deeply
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvigoroustoughnormalathletichealthfulhearty
healthy
 such as grilled Use "(chicken)" to make a comparison with this adjective.(chicken)
chicken
 than Possible spelling mistake found.fast food
fastfood
. * *East* You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvigoroustoughnormalathletichealthfulhearty
healthy
 *, * be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvigoroustoughnormalathletichealthfulhearty
healthy
. 