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Food that is native or not

Food that is native or not AgdDM
As matter of fact, people do not have to eat on specific food, which includes their country food and non-native *Food*, *what is existed* in their homeland. instead, the only significant point is to have all required nutritional elements which is necessary for body. *becuase* in any country some foods are not healthy *though* people eat them a lot. in addition, octups are eaten too often in East-Asian countries which is so dangerous. *We can replace any food that arr not native, and are deeply healthy such as grilled chicken than fastfood. * *East* healthy *, * be healthy.
As matter of fact,
people
do not
have to
eat on specific
food
, which includes their country
food
and non-native *Foo
d*,
*what
is existed
* in their homeland.
instead
, the
only
significant point is to have all required nutritional elements which is necessary for body. *
becuase
* in any country
some
foods
are not
healthy
*though*
people
eat them a lot.
in
addition,
octups
are eaten
too
often
in East-Asian countries which is
so
dangerous
. *We can replace any
food
that arr not native, and are
deeply
healthy
such as grilled
chicken
than
fastfood
. * *East*
healthy
*, * be
healthy
.
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IELTS speaking Food that is native or not

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