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1- Bejing, which is the capital city of china, attract millions of tourists annually.

1- Bejing, which is the capital city of china, attract millions of tourists annually. l7YwK
1- Bejing, which is the capital city of china, attract millions of tourists annually. 2- Eiffel tower, which is located in Paris, is the symbol of French independence. 3- Statue of liberty, which built 100 years ago, is located in New York City. 4- Milad tower, which is the tallest tower in Iran, has built by Mullas. 5- Ali who I will never spend time with, called me last night. 6- Children who wanted to play football ran into the ground. 7- Children, who wanted to play football, ran into the ground. 8- The supermarket where I always buy will be closed for a week.
1-
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Bejing
, which is the capital city of
Capitalize this word if you mean the country, not white porcelain.
china
, attract millions of tourists
annually
.

2-
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.
Eiffel tower
, which
is located
in Paris, is the symbol of French independence.

3-
If the term is a proper noun, use the suggested capitalization.
Statue of liberty
, which built 100 years ago,
is located
in New York City.

4-
Possible spelling mistake found.
Milad
tower, which is the tallest tower in Iran, has built by
Possible spelling mistake found.
Mullas
.

5- Ali who I will never spend time with, called me last night.

6- Children who wanted to play football ran into the ground.

7- Children, who wanted to play football, ran into the ground.

8- The supermarket where I always
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
will
be closed
for a week.
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