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a city you would love to visit

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I would love to visit Da Nang one day. It is a lovely city located in the middle part of Vietnam and I would love to go there with my family. I think that I would be there for about three or four days in order to have enough time to visit all the beautiful scenery as well as enjoy the local food or experience some new activities that I've never tried before. I've heard that Da Nang is famous for the mouthwatering local food such as the signature Mi Quang in Quang Nam so I’d love to taste it. Another activity that I think it would be joyful to try is to go sunbathing on the beach early in the morning with my parents and after that we can visit the ancient streets in Hoi An and purchase many kinds of souvenirs for my friend. I would specifically love to visit this city because I've never been there before and it would be amazing for me to relax as well as create unforgettable memories in Da Nang so those are the reasons why I would love to visit this place.
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