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Many cities have areas where the only cars are taxis and buses. Is this a positive or a negative development? What are the effects of this on individuals and society?

Many cities have areas where the only cars are taxis and buses. Is this a positive or a negative development? What are the effects of this on individuals and society? yDGVV
There are a number of cities with only taxis and busses as cans. I consider this development as a positive one due to the fact that it improves both personal and social life of people by creating comfortable environment and reducing major problems related to trafic and environment. . This developement has many positive sides. To begin with, it creates a healthy envinonment to live in. Roduction of other motor vehicles nesults into less cambon emission which Keeps air, an Important element of environment away from ploution. In other words, having a limited forms of cars helps reganding living a healthy life by providing a fresh and pollution free environment. A survey carried out by the Worlds health organisation revealed that people living in towns with limited number of transport method can live healthier and pollution free life. To have a definite way of transport has its' inflences on people and scocitey. In terms of individuals, People can move more easily to places with taxig and busses. They can take a bus on taxi any time from anywhere which means life become more flexible in respect of travelling and reaching destined places. Besides, these modes of motor cans are for more comfortable to use than the other ones. Providing extra space, busses and taxis ensure comfortable and enjoyable journey especially for childrens and elder people. Reganding the effects or socity, it makes peoples life more easier by easing major problems like traffic jam. If a city restricts othene modes of transport for people, it will help to decline the traffic congestion. traffic jam, as a consequence, will be diminished by a lange mangin. This helps a society to increase the productivity of their time. People of a society can utilize their time properly and can establish a strong base for their future goneration, To conclude Only taxis and busses as cane are enough for a city to define thein developement as a positive development as it brings many advantages to peoples life and reduces many problems.
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taxis and busses as
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development as a
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improves
both personal and social
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life
of
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people
by creating comfortable
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environment
and

reducing major problems related to
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trafic
and
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environment
.
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This
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sides. To
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with, it creates a healthy
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envinonment
to
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in.

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of other motor vehicles
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into less
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emission which
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air, an
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element of
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away from
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.
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helps
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reganding
living a

healthy
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life
by providing a fresh and pollution free
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. A survey

carried out by the
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health

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organisation
revealed that
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people
living in towns with limited number of transport method
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live
healthier and pollution free life.

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way of transport

has
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inflences
on
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people
and

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. In terms of individuals,
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can
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more
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to places

with
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and busses. They
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take

a bus on taxi any time from anywhere which means
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life
become more flexible

in respect of travelling and

reaching destined places.
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, these

modes of motor
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cans
are for more

comfortable to
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use
than the other ones. Providing extra space, busses and taxis ensure comfortable and enjoyable

journey
especially
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by easing major problems like traffic jam. If

a city restricts
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modes

of transport for
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, it will
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to decline the traffic congestion.

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lange
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a society to increase the

productivity of their time.
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of a society
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utilize their time
properly
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can establish a strong

base for their future
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goneration
,

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taxis and busses

as cane are
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to define
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thein
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developement
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positive
development as it brings
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advantages to
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life
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IELTS speaking Many cities have areas where the only cars are taxis and buses. Is this a positive or a negative development? What are the effects of this on individuals and society?

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