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University students nowadays have too much freedom and do not study enough

University students nowadays have too much freedom and do not study enough GJ3wQ
[9/12, 3: 36 PM] PATEL OM: These days students of the collegs have too much freedom and do not study much. [9/12, 3: 42 PM] PATEL OM: To begin with, nowadays colleges are giving too much freedom to students to roam here and there. It should not be happen because nowadays students do not work or do any job so it should be closed to give freedom to students of university. If students will not study, then how can they fulfill their dreams and get better job in the cut-throut world. Colleges give students to have fun masti and all in their free time then utilize that time in doing fun and all, but during study time students should study and get better results and make their college a better and nice college. [9/12, 3: 45 PM] PATEL OM: Moreover, even colleges nowadays they do not check that our college name is going down. Because in collages there are different kinds of days, celebration of festivals, annual day sports day and all. So I think collegs should bannd the free time and should focus on students study.
[9/12, 3: 36 PM] PATEL OM: These days
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students
of the
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collegs
have too much freedom and do not
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study
much.

[9/12, 3: 42 PM] PATEL OM: To
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begin
with, nowadays colleges are giving too much freedom to
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students
to roam here and there. It should not be
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happen
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because
nowadays
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students
do not work or do any job
so
it should
be closed
to give freedom to
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students
of university. If
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students
will not
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study
, then how can they fulfill their dreams and
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get
better job in the
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cut-throut
world. Colleges give
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students
to have fun
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masti
and all in their free
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time
then utilize that
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time
in doing fun and all,
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but
during
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study
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time
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students
should
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study
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
better results and
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make
their college a better and nice college.

[9/12, 3: 45 PM] PATEL OM:
Moreover
, even colleges nowadays they do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
that our college name is going down.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
in collages there are
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different
kinds of days, celebration of festivals, annual day sports day and all.
So
I
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think
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collegs
should
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bannd
the free
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time
and should focus on
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students
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study
.
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IELTS speaking University students nowadays have too much freedom and do not study enough

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  American English
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