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speaking plan going out to eat

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Phuong: Hi Huyen. I am sorry for being late. When I was sleeping, my mom went out and locked the door because she didn’t know I would meet you. How long have you been waiting for me? Huyen: Oh. Don’t worry. I have just come. I see you seem to be exhausted. Are you sick? Phuong: Not serious. I only feel quite tired cause last week, I had to stay up late to prepare for the midterm exam Huyen: Hmm. So. Have you finished the exam? Phuong: yesterday I finished the final subject. How about you. Have you taken IELTS test? Huyen: I will take it next month? Do you want to go out for a meal to relax after a busy time as well as relieve stress for me before the test? Phuong: That is a good idea. I have not eaten Hot pot for a long time. I remember that You are also a big fan of it so can we go to a Hot pot restaurant where you celebrated your birthday party? Huyen: Yeppp. Of course, eating it in this cold weather like this is perfect. I am imagining the aroma of hot pot and If we consume seafood in, it will be extremely delicious. wow I am so hungry. I desire to eat immediately Phuong: why don’t we go this afternoon? Are you going to busy? Huyen: Let me think. Some urgent business has suddenly cropped up and I won’t able to meet you this afternoon. Could we make it a little later? Phuong: Ok. How about at 5 pm tomorrow? Huyen: Hazz. Pretty. Can you come and pick up me? Phuong: No problem. I will pick up you a little earlier and we can go to the restaurant, is that ok? Huyen: Nice. Now I have to go to the library to revise for the test so see you tomorrow. Phuong: see you later. bye bye
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Phuong
: Hi
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Huyen
. I am sorry for being late. When I was sleeping, my mom went out and locked the door
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because
she didn’t know I would
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meet
you. How long have you been waiting for me?

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Huyen
: Oh. Don’t worry. I have
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just
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come
. I
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see
you seem to
be exhausted
. Are you sick?

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Phuong
: Not serious. I
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only
feel quite tired cause last week, I had to stay up late to prepare for the midterm
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exam


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Huyen
: Hmm.
So
. Have you finished the exam?

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Phuong
: yesterday I finished the final subject. How about you. Have you taken IELTS
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test
?

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Huyen
: I will take it
next
month? Do you want to go out for a meal to relax after a busy time as
well
as relieve
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stress
for me
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before
the
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test
?

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Phuong
:
That is
a
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good
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idea
. I have not eaten Hot pot for a long time. I remember that You are
also
a
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big
fan of it
so
can we go to a Hot pot restaurant where you celebrated your birthday party?

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Huyen
:
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Yeppp
.
Of course
, eating it in this
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cold
weather like this is perfect. I
The verb 'imagining' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
am imagining
the aroma of hot pot and If we consume seafood in, it will be
extremely
delicious.
Interjections are usually punctuated.
wow
I am
so
hungry. I desire to eat immediately

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Phuong
: why don’t we go this afternoon? Are you going to busy?

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Huyen
:
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Let
me
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think
.
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Some
urgent business has
suddenly
cropped up and I won’t able to
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meet
you this afternoon. Could we
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make
it a
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little
later?

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Phuong
: Ok. How about at 5 pm tomorrow?

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Huyen
:
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Hazz
. Pretty. Can you
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come
and pick up me?

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Phuong
: No problem. I will pick up you a
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little
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
earlier and
we can go to the restaurant, is that ok?

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Huyen
: Nice.
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Now
I
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have to
go to the library to revise for the
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test
so
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see
you tomorrow.

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Phuong
:
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see
you later.
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
bye bye
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IELTS speaking speaking plan going out to eat

Speaking
  American English
14 paragraphs
320 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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