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kindnees and the kindest person you know

kindnees and the kindest person you know 2RX2b
Kindness has different definition. It depends on the criterion that we accept. A person who i can introduce her as the kindness one is my mother. I can count on her every time in every situation without any doubt. She helps me in every way and gives me the most useful advices. It doesn't matter who you are, she will treat you the greatest way. Everyone that knows her agrees with me. She believes that if you go forward with your heart, you will achieve what you want. She is the only one i worship
Kindness has
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definition. It depends on the criterion that we accept.

A person who
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can introduce her as the kindness one is my mother. I can count on her every time in every situation without any doubt.

She
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helps
me in every way and gives me the most useful advices.

It doesn't matter who you are, she will treat you the greatest

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way
. Everyone that knows her
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with me. She believes that if you go forward with your heart, you will achieve what you want.

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one
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worship
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IELTS speaking kindnees and the kindest person you know

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6 paragraphs
94 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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