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an exciting experience in my life

an exciting experience in my life XqB68

Hi, my name is Ta Thu Giang. Today I am going to talk about an exciting experience that I have before. It was a training art for Vietnamese Teacher's Day in high school a year ago. My school had required each class to prepare a dance or sing so we chose dancing, and we had 7 days to finish it. I was a member of the dance team of my class and I trained my classmate's dancers. On the first day, we took a band member and started to choose a song that fit our abilities. Then we went online to find movements and practiced them. The next day, at the end of the lesson, I stayed for dance practice. During the training period, we had a small disagreement with another member about the preparation set of costumes and formations. After that, we found the problem and we worked on it. Soon we got to know each other better. I and my friend had a break after intense training, we ate, drank, and talked together be going home. Later we trained a lot better and better. Finally, my class was chosen to perform. Now I feel very happy and excited. It is been a great memory for me in high school. It was a great time with my closet friends.

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