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Can you describe a little bit about your hometown?

Can you describe a little bit about your hometown? RVN3W
I was born and raised in Ho Chi Minh city which is located in the Southern part of Vietnam. It is a metropolitan area with millions of dwellers. As a matter of fact, I believe it is the most populated city in Vietnam. Ho Chi Minh City is your typical metropolitan city. The city is open 24-7, and is home to many cafes and restaurants serving food from all around the world. The traffic is dizzying and life happens at full-speed. It has all the entertainment services young people look for. Entertainment centers as well as beautiful landscapes in this city could be easily be found.
I
was born
and raised in
Ho Chi Minh city
which
is located
in the Southern part of Vietnam. It is a metropolitan area with millions of dwellers. As a matter of fact, I believe it is the most populated city in Vietnam. Ho Chi Minh City is your typical metropolitan city. The city is open 24-7, and is home to
many
cafes
and restaurants serving food from all around the world. The traffic is dizzying and life happens at full-speed. It has all the entertainment services young
people
look for. Entertainment centers as
well
as
beautiful
landscapes in this city could be
easily
be found
.
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IELTS speaking Can you describe a little bit about your hometown?

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1 paragraphs
106 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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