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Are social skills more important than education when looking for a job?

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Chen: Good day, Han. I haven't seen you for a long time. Han: Hello, Chen. How are you doing? Chen: I'm doing well. So, how about you? Han: I'm fine, thanks. Chen: Today, I have some questions to ask you. Can you help me? Han: Sure. What would you like to talk about? Chen: Do you think that a person's social skills are more important than their education nowadays when they are looking for a job? Han: In my opinion, it is better to have an education than to have social skills in getting a job. Chen: Why do you think so? While I still see someone who has a stable job without an education. Can you tell me more about your views on the above issue? Han: There are several reasons why an academic degree takes advantage of a person's academic background and professional experience when looking for a job. Firstly, many companies require job-hunting candidates to possess a certain level of qualification. This means they need to equip themselves with either in-depth knowledge or skills learned in school. So, they can handle the job accurately and quickly. Chen: There are many reasons why people are aware of the importance of social skills. People with social skills, although they do not have adequate education, have more work experience than those without, and they do not take time to access work. It is not uncommon for a person with life experience to help everyone deal with difficult situations more effectively, which helps improve worker productivity. Han: To sum up, I think education and social skills are important when looking for a job. Chen: Oh, that makes sense. Thank you for your comments on this matter. Han: I’m really happy to hear you say that. Chen: You're welcome. Han: Goodbye Chen: Goodbye. See you soon.
Chen:
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day, Han. I haven't
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seen
you for a long time.

Han: Hello, Chen. How are you doing?

Chen: I'm doing
well
.
So
, how about you?

Han: I'm fine, thanks.

Chen:
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, I have
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questions to ask you. Can you
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help
me?

Han: Sure. What would you like to talk about?

Chen: Do you
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think
that a person's
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social
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skills
are more
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important
than their
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education
nowadays when they are looking for a job?

Han: In my opinion, it is better to have an
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education
than to have
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social
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skills
in getting a job.

Chen: Why do you
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think
so
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I
still
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see
someone who has a stable job without an
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education
. Can you
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tell
me more about your views on the above issue?

Han: There are several reasons why an academic degree takes advantage of a person's academic background and professional experience when looking for a job.
Firstly
,
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many
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companies
require job-hunting candidates to possess a certain level of qualification. This means they need to equip themselves with either in-depth knowledge or
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skills
learned in school.
So
, they can handle the job
accurately
and
quickly
.

Chen: There are
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many
reasons why
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people
are aware of the importance of
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social
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skills
.
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People
with
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social
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skills
, although they do not have adequate
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education
, have more work experience than those without, and they do not take time to access work. It is not uncommon for a person with life experience to
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help
everyone deal with difficult situations more
effectively
, which
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helps
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improve
worker productivity.

Han:
To sum up
, I
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think
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education
and
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social
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skills
are
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important
when looking for a job.

Chen: Oh, that
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makes
sense. Thank you for your comments on this matter.

Han: I’m
really
happy to hear you say that.

Chen: You're welcome.

Han: Goodbye

Chen: Goodbye.
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See
you
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soon
.
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IELTS speaking Are social skills more important than education when looking for a job?

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  American English
16 paragraphs
304 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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