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write about a meal you recently had.

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I’m a food lover because I like any kinds of food. I think it’s good to eat any food as long as your diet is balanced. Two weeks ago I had to took my son to the institution, so I had free time until the end of his class. While I was walking along the street, the lovely café caught my eye. It had a beautiful natural view and clean yard. There were narrow streams of water flowing around the yard. A cute duck with its chickens were walking in the yard. The weather was so nice and I sat on the wooden table. A young man with friendly smile, gave me the menu. I have a sweet tooth and when I see the moist cake, I lose my control and I give in. What surprised me the most was that there were various types of sweets, cakes, hot and cold drinks and snacks; hence, it took me quite a long time to choose on. Finally, I ordered chocolate cake with ice-cream and a glass of tea. Then, I listened to the music, while I was enjoying of my rare lonely. After that, the dessert was served. It was a really beautiful dish with a big slice of warm chocolate cake with liquid chocolate souse. Beside it, there were three scoops of vanilla and cocoa ice-cream. Next to them, was put slices of fresh fruits like kiwi, banana, Also some nuts. A fresh cup of hot and fresh tea completed my little celebration. Generally, the appearance of dish sharpened my appetite. I enjoyed a lot, dessert was not only luscious, but also beautiful design. Above all, sometimes though you just want to get away from all the hustle and bustle of life to a nice quiet place.
I’m a food lover
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because
I like any kinds of food. I
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think
it’s
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good
to eat any food as long as your diet
is balanced
.

Two weeks ago I had to took my son to the institution,
so
I had free time until the
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end
of his
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class
.

While I was walking along the street, the lovely café caught my eye.

It had a
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beautiful
natural view and clean yard. There were narrow streams of water flowing around the yard. A cute duck with its chickens were walking in the yard.

The weather was
so
nice and I sat on the wooden table.

A young
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
with friendly smile, gave me the menu.

I have a sweet tooth and when I
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see
the moist
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cake
, I lose my control and I give in.

What surprised me the most was that there were various types of sweets,
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cakes
, hot and
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cold
drinks and snacks;
hence
, it took me quite a long time to choose on.

Finally
, I ordered chocolate
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cake
with ice-cream and a glass of tea.

Then, I listened to the music, while I was enjoying of my rare lonely.

After that, the dessert
was served
. It was a
really
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beautiful
dish with a
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big
slice of warm chocolate
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cake
with liquid chocolate souse. Beside it, there were three scoops of vanilla and cocoa ice-cream.
Next
to them,
was put
slices of fresh fruits like kiwi, banana,
Also
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some
nuts.

A fresh cup of hot and fresh tea completed my
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little
celebration.
Generally
, the appearance of dish sharpened my appetite.

I enjoyed a lot, dessert was not
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only
luscious,
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but
also
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beautiful
design.

Above all
,
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sometimes
though you
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just
want to
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get
away from all the hustle and bustle of life to a nice quiet place.
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IELTS speaking write about a meal you recently had.

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14 paragraphs
297 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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