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Describe a person you would like to study or work with. v.1

Describe a person you would like to study or work with. v. 1
Describe a person you would like to study or work with. You should say: who this person is how you know him/her what you would like to study or do with him/her and explain why you would like to study or work with this person. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer 1: It always helps if you are in good company, whether it is with a fellow student or a fellow worker, as it almost always makes your life a little easier. And, I am lucky that I have always found such good companies in my life as a student. Today, I would like to talk about one such person whom I have known for more than 3 years as one of my best friends at my university, and we both study in the same Major of Chemistry. Anyway, even though Timothy Chris and I know each other really well, we never really had a chance to work or study together, even though I know that we would make a great team together. So, the other day, when I told Timothy how we could benefit from each other by studying together, even though we may have different schedules, he gladly agreed with me. As a result, now we spend a great deal of time in our chemistry class studying in the same group as well as in the library, let alone spending countless of hours in the chemistry lab, doing experiments. I would like to study with Timothy primarily because we go along really nicely, having a great understanding of each other. Besides, I am not really very good at “physical chemistry” since it involves a lot of math. In this kind of situation, Timothy can really help me since he is really good at math. I would also like to study with him because of his great helping attitude whether one is having a tough time understanding simple things or writing a thesis paper. On top of that, Timothy likes to talk about an array of issues, such as history and politics, just like me. Finally, Timothy is also in inter-university debate competition like me. So, I am pretty sure that if I study together with Timothy, it will not only benefit me with my university curriculum but also in extra-curricular activities.
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Describe
a
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person
you would like to
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study
or work with. You should say: who this
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person
is how
you know
him/her what you would like to
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study
or do with him/her and
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explain
why you would like to
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study
or work with this
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person
. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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Model Answer 1: It always
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helps
if you are in
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good
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company
, whether it is with a fellow student or a fellow worker, as it almost always
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makes
your life a
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little
easier. And, I am lucky that I have always found such
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good
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companies
in my life as a student.
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Today
, I would like to talk about one such
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person
whom I have known for more than 3 years as one of my best friends at my university, and we both
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study
in the same Major of Chemistry.

Anyway
,
even though
Timothy Chris and I know each
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other
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really
well
, we never
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really
had a chance to work or
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study
together,
even though
I know that we would
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make
a
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great
team together.
So
, the
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other
day, when I
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told
Timothy how we could benefit from each
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other
by studying together,
even though
we may have
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different
schedules, he
gladly
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agreed
with me.
As a result
,
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now
we spend a
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great
deal of time in our chemistry
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class
studying in the same group as
well
as in the library,
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let
alone spending
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countless of hours
in the chemistry lab, doing experiments.

I would like to
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study
with Timothy
primarily
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because
we go along
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really
nicely
, having a
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great
understanding of each
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other
.
Besides
, I am not
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really
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very
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good
at “physical chemistry” since it involves
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a lot of
math. In this kind of situation, Timothy can
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really
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help
me since he is
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really
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good
at math. I would
also
like to
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study
with him
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because
of his
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great
helping attitude whether one is having a tough time understanding simple things or writing a thesis paper.
On top of that
, Timothy likes to talk about an array of issues, such as history and politics,
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just
like me.
Finally
, Timothy is
also
in inter-university debate competition like me.
So
, I am pretty sure that if I
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study
together with Timothy, it will not
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only
benefit me with my university curriculum
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but
also
in extra-curricular activities.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe a person you would like to study or work with. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
3 paragraphs
418 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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