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Describe a person who is beautiful or handsome. v.1

Describe a person who is beautiful or handsome. v. 1
Describe a person who is beautiful or handsome. You should say: who this person is how you know or met him/her what this person does and explain what makes this person beautiful or handsome. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer 1: No doubt, we are biased in our behaviour and attitude no matter how hard we try not to be. As a result, we tend to prefer someone or something while ignoring the others at our discretion. However, when we say that we like or prefer someone, it doesn’t necessarily mean that the persons, we like, are “better” than others, but it is just how we like to “feel” about a certain person or the others. And, the same also holds true when we say that someone is “beautiful” or “handsome” just as when I say that my maternal uncle is handsome. Well, he is my uncle - my most favourite uncle in that, so, he has to be “handsome”. I mean, how possibly a favourite uncle can’t be “handsome” to his nephew! ? And, by the way, I know my uncle to be “handsome” and nice from the time I have come to recognize him from a very early age. He is a good looking person with a more than average height and strong, symmetrical features. But what makes his handsome to me is probably his confidence. In fact, there is hardly a day that goes by without meeting him or talking to him since he lives very close by my family. He is a doctor by profession, but he is also treated as a “leader” figure among his community members probably because of his abilities to help others during the time of crisis, his infallible confidence as well as because of his noble profession. So, what exactly makes my uncle “handsome”? Well, I find him handsome simply because of the ways he “carries” himself around, as well as because of the ways, he presents himself to others while always having a positive attitude. Besides, if you see your uncle to remain nicely dressed and combed most of the times, he has to be “handsome”.   Isn’t it like that? But, if his nice attires and nicely-combed hair aren’t enough to make him look “handsome”, then his “soft words” and “smiley face”, while talking to others, should also make him a “handsome” person. Am I right? Well, if not, an uncle’s unending love and affection for his nephew and his family should certainly make the “most handsome” person in the world, and that’s exactly how much “handsome” my uncle really is!
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Describe
a
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person
who is
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beautiful
or
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handsome
. You should say: who this
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person
is how
you know
or met him/her what this
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person
does and
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explain
what
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makes
this
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person
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beautiful
or
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handsome
. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
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Model Answer 1: No doubt, we
are biased
in our
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behaviour
and attitude no matter how
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hard
we try not to be.
As a result
, we tend to prefer someone or something while ignoring the others at our discretion.
However
, when we say that we like or prefer someone, it doesn’t
necessarily
mean that the
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persons
, we like, are “better” than others,
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but
it is
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just
how we like to “feel” about a certain
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person
or the others. And, the same
also
holds true when we say that someone is “
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beautiful
” or
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“handsome”
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just
as when I say that my maternal
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uncle
is handsome.

Well
, he is my
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uncle
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-
my most
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favourite
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uncle
in that,
so
, he
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has to
be
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“handsome”
.
I mean
, how
possibly
a
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favourite
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uncle
can’t be
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“handsome”
to his nephew! ? And, by the way, I know my
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uncle
to be
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“handsome”
and nice from the time I have
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come
to recognize him from a
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very
early age. He is a
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good looking
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person
with a more than average height and strong, symmetrical features.
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But
what
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makes
his
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handsome
to me is
probably
his confidence.

In fact, there is hardly a day that goes by without meeting him or talking to him since he
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lives
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very
close by my family. He is a doctor by profession,
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but
he is
also
treated as a “leader” figure among his community members
probably
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because
of his abilities to
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help
others during the time of crisis, his infallible confidence as
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well
as
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because
of his noble profession.

So
, what exactly
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makes
my
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uncle
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“handsome”
?
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Well
, I find him
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handsome
simply
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because
of the ways he “carries” himself around, as
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well
as
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because
of the ways, he presents himself to others while always having a
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positive
attitude.
Besides
, if you
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see
your
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uncle
to remain
nicely
dressed and combed
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most of the times
, he
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has to
be
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“handsome”
.
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Isn’t it like that?
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But
, if his nice attires and
nicely
-combed hair aren’t
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enough
to
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make
him look
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“handsome”
, then his “soft words” and “smiley face”, while talking to others, should
also
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make
him a
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“handsome”
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person
. Am I
right
?
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Well
, if not, an
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uncle’s
unending
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love
and affection for his nephew and his family should
certainly
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make
the “most
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handsome”
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person
in the world, and that’s exactly how much
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“handsome”
my
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uncle
really
is!
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
43Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes
He who knows no foreign languages know nothing of his own.
Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

IELTS speaking Describe a person who is beautiful or handsome. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
4 paragraphs
467 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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