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Describe your favourite TV channel. v.1

Describe your favourite TV channel. v. 1
Describe your favourite TV channel. You should say: what channel it is how often you watch it what types of programmes it broadcasts and explain why this is your favourite TV channel.   Model Answer 1: Watching TV is one of my most favourite forms of entertainment because of the convenience and the diversity in entertainment it provides. But, unfortunately, I don’t really have much time to watch TV because of my work. Still, I try to enjoy different kinds of programmes on it, especially, if they are aired by “National Geographic” channel. Anyway, since National Geographic channel is one of the most popular TV channels in the world for the thinking minds, it doesn’t really need any introduction. Still, just for academic purpose, this TV channel is an American pay television network which provides non-fictional TV programmes like documentaries with factual contents,   involving nature, science, culture, and history, plus some reality and pseudo-scientific entertainment programmes. Then, its primary sister network worldwide, including the United States, is Nat Geo Wild, which focuses on animal-related programming only. In fact, the programmes on National Geographic TV channel are so diversified, as well as educational, interesting, informative, entertaining and serious, that once a person watches its programmes, he or she becomes hooked to it. Of course, this TV channel is not without some controversy, but it is also true at the same time that no other channels let us see and explore our world in the way that national geographic does, whether we see how a tiger hunts in a forest or how Antarctica melts. Anyway, even though, it is my favourite channel, I don’t get to watch it more than twice a week or so. The national geographic channel is my favourite channel, mainly because of the quality and the contents it provides. Besides, all the programmes on this TV channel are so unique and educational that I can watch it with my entire family while enjoying some quality family time together. However, the best thing that I really like about this TV channel is that it is never afraid to bring the “truth” out in the light about any issues even though they may prove out to be controversial. So, again, National geography TV channel rocks.   Sample Answer 2: I do not watch TV that much but it is a great electronic and mass media for education and entertainment. Sometimes I watch TV, mostly in my free time and among the channels I watch, 'Discovery Channel' is my favourite one. Whenever I held the TV remote control in my hand, I look for either a news channel or Discovery channel. This is the channel I watch more often than any other channels. I watch it for 4-8 hours per week. On my day off, if I am in front of the TV, I watch the great educational and recreational programs that this channel broadcasts.   It broadcasts mainly documentary programs focusing on popular science, technology and history. But recently they have started showing some other types of programs like reality shows and pseudo-technologies and entertainments. There are some unique programs that they present to their audiences like Myth Busters, Unsolved History, automobiles, and occupations etc. This channel started broadcasting from 1985 and has become one of the most popular TV channels in the world because of their emphasis on high-quality programs.   I like this TV channel because of the programs and documentaries they present. Most of the programmes are thoroughly enjoyable and offer lots of information to the viewers. This is one of the great sources for me to learn history, technology and other educational knowledge. The picture quality is really nice and this channel is easily available via the cable service providers. I found this channel really interesting and I can learn many new things watching it.     Similar Cue Card Topics: Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would also enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as well: Describe a TV channel you often watch. Describe a popular TV channel in your country. Describe a radio station or TV channel you know about. Describe a news channel you often watch. Describe a news source you know about. Describe an interesting TV or radio program.
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Describe
your
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favourite
TV
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channel
. You should say: what
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channel
it is how
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often
you
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watch
it what types of
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programmes
it broadcasts and
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explain
why this is your
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favourite
TV
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channel
.
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Model Answer 1:

Watching TV is one of my most
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favourite
forms of entertainment
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because
of the convenience and the diversity in entertainment it provides.
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But
, unfortunately, I don’t
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really
have much
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time
to
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watch
TV
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because
of my work.
Still
, I try to enjoy
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different
kinds of
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programmes
on it,
especially
, if they
are aired
by
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“National
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Geographic”
channel.

Anyway
, since
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National
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Geographic
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channel
is one of the most
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popular
TV
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channels
in the world for the thinking minds, it doesn’t
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really
need any introduction.
Still
,
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just
for academic purpose, this TV
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channel
is an American pay television network which provides non-fictional TV
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programmes
like documentaries with factual contents,
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involving nature, science, culture, and
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history
, plus
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some
reality and pseudo-scientific entertainment
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programmes
. Then, its primary sister network worldwide, including the United States, is Nat Geo Wild, which focuses on animal-related programming
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only
.

In fact, the
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programmes
on
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National
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Geographic
TV
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channel
are
so
diversified, as
well
as
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educational
, interesting, informative, entertaining and serious, that once a person
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watches
its
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programmes
, he or she becomes hooked to it.
Of course
, this TV
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channel
is not without
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some
controversy,
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but
it is
also
true at the same
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time
that no
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other
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channels
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let
us
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see
and explore our world in the way that
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national
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geographic
does, whether we
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see
how a tiger hunts in a forest or how Antarctica melts.
Anyway
,
even though
, it is my
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favourite
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channel
, I don’t
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get
to
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watch
it more than twice a week or
so
.

The
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national
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geographic
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channel
is my
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favourite
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channel
,
mainly
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because
of the quality and the contents it provides.
Besides
, all the
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programmes
on this TV
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channel
are
so
unique and
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educational
that I can
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watch
it with my entire family while enjoying
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some
quality family
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time
together.
However
, the best thing that I
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really
like about this TV
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channel
is that it is never afraid to bring the “truth” out in the light about any issues
even though
they may prove out to be controversial.
So
, again,
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National
geography TV
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channel
rocks.
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Sample Answer 2:

I do not
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watch
TV that much
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but
it is a great electronic and mass media for education and entertainment.
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Sometimes
I
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watch
TV,
mostly
in my free
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time
and among the
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channels
I
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watch
, 'Discovery Channel' is my
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favourite
one. Whenever I held the TV remote control in my hand, I look for either a
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news
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channel
or Discovery
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channel
. This is the
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channel
I
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watch
more
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often
than any
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other
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channels
. I
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watch
it for 4-8 hours per week. On my day off, if I am in front of the TV, I
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watch
the great
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educational
and recreational
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programs
that this
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channel
broadcasts.
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It broadcasts
mainly
documentary
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programs
focusing on
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popular
science, technology and
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history
.
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But
recently they have
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started
showing
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some
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other
types of
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programs
like reality
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shows
and pseudo-technologies and entertainments. There are
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some
unique
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programs
that they present to their audiences like Myth Busters, Unsolved
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History
, automobiles, and occupations etc. This
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channel
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started
broadcasting from 1985 and has become one of the most
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popular
TV
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channels
in the world
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because
of their emphasis on high-quality
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programs
.
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I like this TV
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channel
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because
of the
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programs
and documentaries they present. Most of the
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programmes
are
thoroughly
enjoyable and offer lots of information to the viewers. This is one of the great sources for me to learn
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history
, technology and
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other
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educational
knowledge. The picture quality is
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really
nice and this
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channel
is
easily
available via the cable service providers. I found this
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channel
The extreme adjective for interesting is "fascinating", or "exciting".
really interesting
and I can learn
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many
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new
things watching it.
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Similar Cue Card Topics: Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would
also
enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as
well
:
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
a TV
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channel
you
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often
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watch
.
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Describe
a
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popular
TV
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channel
in your country.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
a radio station or TV
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channel
you know
about.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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news
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
channel
you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
often
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watch
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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news
source
you know
about.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
an interesting TV or radio
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
program
.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
107Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
24Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe your favourite TV channel. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
6 paragraphs
715 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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