Describe a job that helps make the world a better place. v.1
Describe a job that helps make the world a better place. v. 1
Describe a job that helps make the world a better place. You should say: what job it is how you have learned about this job why you think it is an important job and explain why you think this job helps make the world a better place.
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a
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job
that
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helps
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make
the world a better place. You should say: what
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job
it is how you have learned about this
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job
why you
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think
it is an
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important
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job
and
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explain
why you
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think
this
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job
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
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make
the world a better place.
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5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
IELTS speaking Describe a job that helps make the world a better place. v. 1
Speaking
American English
1 paragraphs
47 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes