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Describe your favourite place for shopping. v.1

Describe your favourite place for shopping. v. 1
Describe your favourite place for shopping. You should say: where it is what types of products are available there how frequently you visit there and explain why this is your favourite place for shopping. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer: I don’t really like to go shopping unless I have a good reason to do so, because it usually takes longer than usual for me to do the shopping most of the times. However, here I would like to talk about a shopping place which rather encourages me to visit it once in a while. The name of this shopping place is “Buy All You Can” which is located in the outskirt of my hometown.   It is more like a “supercenter” which opens at 6: 00 am every morning and closes at 11: 00 pm. I would say that it is easily one of the busiest shopping places in my town because I have seldom found a dull and quiet moment there, no matter what time I visit it. Covering an area of about 7000 square feet, with a large parking space in front of it, this shopping place draws all types of customers, not only from within the city but also from outside of the city, most of the times. Of course, these customers have a handful of reasons to visit this busy supercenter, but the main reason is that it sells a complete line of grocery products, including fruits, vegetables, dry foods, snacks, loaves of bread and cakes, fish, meat, dairy products, frozen food, kitchen and household appliances, and cleaning products, among many other items for our daily needs. This supercenter also has separate sections for “seasonal clothing items” and “beauty products”. One of the distinct features of this shopping place is that it sells both the “high-end” products as well as the products for “regular” customers. There are other reasons for visiting this great shopping place, but I visit it twice a month mostly to buy some fresh fish and vegetables. Anyway, this is my favourite shopping place because I can find and buy the products, I want, rather easily and quickly without asking the store crews there. Besides, I also like to visit this big store because it promotes the products of “serious small businesses” as opposed to just selling the merchandises of only big and profit-making companies.
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Describe
your
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favourite
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place
for
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shopping
. You should say: where it is what types of
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products
are available there how
frequently
you
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visit
there and
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explain
why this is your
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favourite
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place
for
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shopping
. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
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Model Answer:

I don’t
really
like to go
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shopping
unless I have a
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good
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reason
to do
so
,
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because
it
usually
takes longer than usual for me to do the
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shopping
Consider using "most of the time" if you mean "usually" or "very often".
most of the times
.
However
, here I would like to talk about a
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shopping
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place
which
rather
encourages me to
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visit
it once in a while.

The name of this
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shopping
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place
is “
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Buy
All You Can” which
is located
in the outskirt of my hometown.
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It is more like a “
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supercenter
” which opens at 6: 00 am every morning and closes at 11: 00 pm. I would say that it is
easily
one of the busiest
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shopping
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places
in my town
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because
I have seldom found a dull and quiet moment there, no matter what time I
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visit
it.

Covering an area of about
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7000 square feet
, with a large parking space in front of it, this
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shopping
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place
draws all types of customers, not
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only
from within the city
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but
also
from
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outside of
the city,
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most of the times
.
Of course
, these customers have a handful of
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reasons
to
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visit
this busy
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supercenter
,
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but
the main
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reason
is that it sells a complete line of grocery
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products
, including fruits, vegetables, dry foods, snacks, loaves of bread and cakes, fish, meat, dairy
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products
, frozen food, kitchen and household appliances, and cleaning
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products
, among
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many
other items for our daily needs. This
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supercenter
also
has separate sections for “seasonal clothing items” and “beauty
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products”
. One of the distinct features of this
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shopping
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place
is that it sells both the “high-
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end
”
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products
as
well
as the
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products
for “regular” customers. There are other
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reasons
for visiting this great
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shopping
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
,
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but
I
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visit
it twice a month
mostly
to
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buy
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some
fresh fish and vegetables.

Anyway
, this is my
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favourite
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shopping
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place
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because
I can find and
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buy
the
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products
, I want,
rather
easily
and
quickly
without asking the store crews there.
Besides
, I
also
like to
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visit
this
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big
store
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because
it promotes the
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products
of “serious
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small
businesses” as opposed to
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just
selling the merchandises of
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only
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big
and profit-making
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
39Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe your favourite place for shopping. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
5 paragraphs
428 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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