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HOME AWAY FROM HOME Still worried about accommodation in Delhi NCR for your trip! Give a break to your search, you’re at right place. The orange county is an one stop solution for the tourists coming to the Delhi NCR. I’m offering my accommodation for stay to the tourists coming to Delhi NCR, especially those who are on a tight budget. My place is a perfect destination for solo travellers and people who are on a staycation. I own a semi-detached house in the suburbs of Delhi. One floor is for my family. I want to give the second floor as a holiday rental. The proposed floor is a self-contained studio with a fully fitted mini-kitchen, private bathroom and access to luscious green garden. The offered studio is fully furnished, you don’t need to bring anything with you, expect your clothes and other needy things. As I have mentioned earlier this area is away from the city centre so you don’t have to worry about the neighborhood, this area comes under the noise free-zone so it’s a very quiet place. Away from the city centre does not mean you’re completely cut off the facilities you generally get in metropolitan cities. All shops and banks are within 5 km radius and you can catch metro and other public transport very easily. The Metro is within 5 mins of walking distance and the nearest bus stop is only 200 meters away from the location. I’m a pet allergic person, so no pets allowed. Rent of this place is ₹2000 per night. This price includes one private parking and breakfast as well. Guests can visit you but not after 7 pm. A perfect place for solo travellers and people who are on a staycation and want to spend some time away from the hustle of city life.
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in the suburbs of Delhi. One floor is for my family. I want to give the second floor as a holiday rental. The proposed floor is a self-contained studio with a
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