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the person i love the most

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The person I love the most is my mother. My mother is 44 years old this year, not too tall. My mother has shoulder-length black hair, a round and kind face. On the mother's face, the eyebrows, nose and lips are very suitable for the face. Because the mother is no longer young, there are wrinkles on her face, her eyes are no longer sharp, so she often has to wear glasses. I feel the need to study hard to make my mother happy.
The person I
love
the most is my
mother
. My
mother
is 44 years
old
this year, not too tall. My
mother
has shoulder-length black hair, a round and kind
face
. On the mother's
face
, the eyebrows, nose and lips are
very
suitable for the
face
.
Because
the
mother
is no longer young, there are wrinkles on her
face
, her eyes are no longer sharp,
so
she
often
has to
wear glasses. I feel the need to study
hard
to
make
my
mother
happy.
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IELTS speaking the person i love the most

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  American English
1 paragraphs
84 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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