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Describe a workplace you have worked in or know about. v.1

Describe a workplace you have worked in or know about. v. 1
Describe a workplace you have worked in or know about. You should say: what it looks like who worked there how you know about it and explain if this is a good working environment or not. Model Answer: I am yet to finish my graduation and that’s why I am not engaged in any full-time job. However, I worked for a foreign company as a part time survey officer and was really impressed with the workplace they offered. That was a 6 story modern building and they owned it. I worked in 3rd floor and the office was pretty neat and friendly for the employees. The cubicles were large enough and the friendly environment of this office gave a very positive impression about this company. There were many foreigners and local employees there and most of them were a business consultant, admin and team leads. I personally worked with a team who were specialised in data mining and database designing. There were many software engineers who were engaged in developing software. I knew about his office from a bulletin board of my university that offered different important noticed for the students and faculty. I noticed the job offer and was interested about it. Since I worked for this company for more than 8 months; I know it from my first-hand experience. To me, this was an ideal working environment that maintained a good balance among the working environment, facilities and options for recreations and study. A whole floor was dedicated to the library and reference works which are really rare for many companies. To surmise, I found it to be a very pleasant and friendly workplace where employees are self-motivated to work for the company.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a company where you worked. Describe your idea about a perfect work environment. Describe a positive work environment you know about. Describe a company you would like to work for. Describe a kind of job you have been engaged in.
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Describe
a workplace you have worked in or
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know
about. You should say: what it looks like who worked there how you
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know
about it and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
if this is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
working
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environment
or not. Model Answer:

I am
yet
to finish my graduation and that’s why I am not engaged in any full-time job.
However
, I worked for a foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
as a
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
part time
survey officer and was
really
impressed with the workplace they offered. That was a
When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "6-story"
6 story
modern
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
building and
they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
owned
it. I worked in 3rd floor and the office was pretty neat and friendly for the employees. The cubicles were large
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enough
and the friendly
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environment
of this office gave a
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very
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positive
impression about this
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company
. There were
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many
foreigners and local employees there and most of them were a business consultant, admin and team leads. I
personally
worked with a team who were
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specialised
in data mining and database designing. There were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
software engineers who
were engaged
in developing software. I knew about his office from a bulletin board of my university that offered
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different
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important
noticed for the students and faculty. I noticed the job offer and
was interested
about it. Since I worked for this
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company
for more than 8 months; I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
it from my
first
-hand experience. To me, this was an ideal working
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
that maintained a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
balance among the working
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
, facilities and options for recreations and study. A whole floor
was dedicated
to the library and reference works which are
really
rare for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
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companies
. To surmise, I found it to be a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
pleasant and friendly workplace where employees are self-motivated to
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work
for the
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company
.
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Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
where you worked.
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Describe
your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
about a perfect
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
.
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Describe
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
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work
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
about.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
you would like to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
for.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a kind of job you have
been engaged
in.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a workplace you have worked in or know about. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
351 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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