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Describe one of your typical days when you are not working or studying. v.1

Describe one of your typical days when you are not working or studying. v. 1
Describe one of your typical days when you are not working or studying. You should say: what you do how you enjoy it how it is different from other days and explain if you like it or not. Model Answer: I am in my final term of my graduation and that’s why my life is a bit tied up with the routine as it should be for a student. When I do not have classes or approaching exams, I try to spend my time is ease and relaxation so that I can get refreshed and recharged. On one such day, I get up late from sleep and after that, I take a good breakfast. I then take shower and go to the shopping malls to purchase my necessary stuff. Since I do not get time every day, I do my shopping on my free days. I watch movies or TV serials till noon and try to eat outside with friends in the evening. Sometimes I make plans to hang around with my friends at their places and take my dinner in a restaurant. In the evening after I get back home, I either read a novel or watch movies. Hanging with friends, watching movies, listening to music, internet surfing and spending time with family members are the main enjoyment I have during my typical free days. Such a day is quite different from my other typical days as I do not go to my university, do not read for 4-5 hours a day or even do not spend time for approaching exams. In my opinion, such days are important to get relieved from the monotonous routines and scheduled life. I really enjoy such days as I do not have much hurry to do everything. I enjoy spending time with my family members and friends. I enjoy the relaxing mood I can possess during my free days.     Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as well: Describe a holiday you recently had. Describe a day that you enjoyed hanging with friends. Describe a typical day of your life. Describe something you enjoy doing.
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Describe
one of your
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typical
days when you are not working or studying. You should say: what you do how you
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enjoy
it how it is
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different
from other days and
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explain
if you like it or not. Model Answer:

I am in my final term of my graduation and that’s why my life is a bit tied up with the routine as it should be for a student. When I do not have classes or approaching exams, I try to spend my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ease
and relaxation
so
that I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
refreshed and recharged. On one such day, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
up late from sleep and after that, I take a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
breakfast. I then take shower and go to the shopping malls to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
my necessary stuff. Since I do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
every day, I do my shopping on my free days. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
movies or TV serials till noon and try to eat outside with
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friends
in the evening.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Sometimes
I
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make
plans to hang around with my
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friends
at their places and take my dinner in a restaurant. In the evening after I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
back home, I either read a novel or
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watch
movies. Hanging with
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friends
, watching movies, listening to music, internet surfing and spending
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time
with family members are the main enjoyment I have during my
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typical
free days. Such a day is quite
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
from my other
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typical
days as I do not go to my university, do not read for 4-5 hours a day or even do not spend
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time
for approaching exams. In my opinion, such days are
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important
to
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get
relieved from the monotonous routines and scheduled life. I
really
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enjoy
such days as I do not have much hurry to do everything. I
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enjoy
spending
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time
with my family members and
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friends
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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enjoy
the relaxing mood I can possess during my free days.
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Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as
well
:
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Describe
a holiday you recently had.
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Describe
a day that you enjoyed hanging with
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friends
.
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Describe
a
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typical
day of your life.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
something you
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enjoy
doing.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe one of your typical days when you are not working or studying. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
367 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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