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Describe something which is produced in your country (e. g. a food, a handicraft, or a car). v.1

Describe something which is produced in your country (e. g. a food, a handicraft, or a car). v. 1
Describe something which is produced in your country (e. g. a food, a handicraft, or a car). You should say: what it is what it is used for how it is made/produced and explain why your country produces this thing. Model Answer: We produce a lot of products which we consume or export in other countries and among those products sports items are very famous. In our country, we produce the fine quality game products like football, cricket bats, stamps and jersey. The cricket bats which are produced in our country are used in many cricket playing countries as well as by the big events of ICC. The cricket bats are created from fine quality wood and some very professional and experienced people work on that. The woods are first collected and dried to omit the water portion from it. Then the wood is cut in a shape similar to a cricket bat structure. After the structure is given, the bat is then shaped and fine-tuned to produce a good quality bat. Some mechanical help is needed to give the bats good shapes and to make it flawless. After that, the bats are covered with grippers and other stickers. Cricket is a popular game in our country and the materials and expertise which are required to produce those bats are available in our country. A large number of people have acquired the knowledge to produce this fine quality bats and as there is a very good demand for those bats both in our country and in other cricket playing countries, we produce those bats.   Part 3 – Two-way discussion: Food Production: Q. What are some of the main food products ("foods") that your country produces? Q. What are some food products that come from different parts of your country? Q. What widely consumed food products are mainly imported into your country? Q. Do you think it's important that a country is self-sufficient in food? Other Products /International Trade: Q. Besides food and the product you mentioned earlier, what else is made in your country? Q. Do you think the globalisation of industry and commerce is a good thing? Q. Do you think every country should make everything it needs or should it import some things? Q. What are the disadvantages of a country producing everything it needs?   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe something your country exports. Describe something produced or grown in your country. Describe an important crop or export item in your country. Describe a valuable product produced in your country.
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something which is
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produced
in your
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country
(
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e. g.
a
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food
, a handicraft, or a car).

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used
for how it
is made
/produced and
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explain
why your
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country
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produces
this thing. Model Answer:

We
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produce
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a lot of
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products
which we consume or export in
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other
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countries
and among those
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products
sports items are
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very
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famous
. In our
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country
, we
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produce
the fine
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quality
game
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products
like football,
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cricket
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bats
, stamps and jersey. The
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cricket
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bats
which are
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produced
in our
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country
are
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used
in
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many
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cricket
playing
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countries
as
well
as by the
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big
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events
of ICC.

The
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cricket
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bats
are created
from fine
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quality
wood and
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some
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very
professional and experienced
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people
work on that.
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The
woods are
first
collected and dried to omit the water portion from it. Then the wood is
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cut
in a shape similar to a
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cricket
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bat
structure. After the structure is
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given
, the
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bat
is then shaped and fine-tuned to
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produce
a
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good
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quality
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bat
.
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Some
mechanical
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help
is needed
to give the
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bats
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good
shapes and to
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make
it flawless. After that, the
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bats
are covered
with grippers and
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other
stickers.

Cricket is a popular game in our
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country
and the materials and expertise which
are required
to
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produce
those
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bats
are available in our
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country
.
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A large number of
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people
have acquired the knowledge to
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produce
this fine
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quality
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bats
and as there is a
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very
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good
demand for those
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bats
both in our
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country
and in
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other
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cricket
playing
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countries
, we
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produce
those
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bats
.
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Part 3
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–
Two-way discussion:
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Food
Production: Q. What are
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some of the
main
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food
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products
(
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"
foods
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"
) that your
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country
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produces
? Q. What are
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some
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food
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products
that
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come
from
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different
parts of your
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country
? Q. What
widely
consumed
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food
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products
are
mainly
imported into your
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country
?
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Q
. Do you
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think
it's
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important
that a
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country
is self-sufficient in
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food
?
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Other
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Products
/International Trade: Q.
Besides
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food
and the
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product
you mentioned earlier, what else
is made
in your
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country
? Q. Do you
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think
the
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globalisation
of industry and commerce is a
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good
thing? Q. Do you
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think
every
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country
should
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make
everything it needs or should it import
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some
things?
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Q
. What are the disadvantages of a
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country
producing everything it needs?
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Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
something your
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country
exports.
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Describe
something
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produced
or grown in your
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country
.
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Describe
an
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important
crop or export item in your
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country
.
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Describe
a valuable
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product
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produced
in your
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country
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
85Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe something which is produced in your country (e. g. a food, a handicraft, or a car). v. 1

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  American English
5 paragraphs
444 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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