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Describe a foreign product you would like to buy. v.1

Describe a foreign product you would like to buy. v. 1
Describe a foreign product you would like to buy. You should say:     What it is     Why you want to buy it     Does it have any special feature and say why you want to buy it. Sample Answer: In our country, we produce many products that we export to different other countries and on the contrary, we also import many foreign products starting from food to electronic devices. The foreign product that I would like to buy is a Japanese car. The car is manufactured by a famous Japanese automobile manufacturing brand named Nissan and I would like to buy the latest car of this brand. I do not have a car and I have been planning to purchase one for the last 2 years. I started saving a budget and I guess I am now ready to own a car of my own. I went through the cars available in our country and did some research on the internet about the available cars in our city and found that Nissan car as a suitable one for my need. The price is affordable for me and the facilities this car offers, match my requirement. Yes, the auto navigation by the map is a new feature of this car and it would help me to find new locations very easily using GPRS facility with this car. As I have already said, the car model I have planned to buy is a good one in terms of the budget and facilities it offers. This is a good car within my reach and that’s the main reason I want to buy it. Furthermore, Japan has a reputation for producing the finest cars and in my opinion, purchasing a car manufactured by a famous Japanese automobile manufacturing company would be a good deal for me. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe something you want to buy in the future.   Describe an important thing that you own.   Describe a valuable possessions you have.   Describe something you bought and was dissatisfied about.
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Describe
a foreign
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product
you would like to
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buy
. You should say:
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What it is
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Why you
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want
to
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buy
it
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Does it have any special feature and say why you
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want
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buy
it. Sample Answer:

In our country, we produce
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many
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products
that we export to
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different
other countries and
on the contrary
, we
also
import
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many
foreign
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products
starting from food to electronic devices. The foreign
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product
that I would like to
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buy
is a Japanese
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car
. The
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car
is manufactured
by a
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famous
Japanese automobile manufacturing brand named Nissan and I would like to
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buy
the latest
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car
of this brand.

I do not have a
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car
and I have been planning to
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purchase
one for the last 2 years. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
saving a budget and
I guess
I am
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now
ready to
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own
a
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car
of my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
went through the
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cars
available in our country and did
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some
research on the internet about the available
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cars
in our city and found that Nissan
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car
as a suitable one for my need. The price is affordable for me and the facilities this
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car
offers, match my requirement.

Yes, the auto navigation by the map is a new feature of this
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car
and it would
In informal texts, 'to' is not necessary. Do you mean "help me find"?
help me to find
new locations
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very
easily
using GPRS facility with this
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car
. As I have already said, the
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car
model I have planned to
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buy
is a
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good
one in terms of the budget and facilities it offers. This is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
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car
within my reach and that’s the main reason I
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want
to
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buy
it.
Furthermore
, Japan has a reputation for producing the finest
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cars
and in my opinion, purchasing a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
manufactured by a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
Japanese automobile manufacturing
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company
would be a
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good
deal for me. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
something you
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want
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buy
in the future.
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You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
an
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important
thing that you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
.
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You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
a valuable
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "possession"?
possessions
you have.
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Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
something you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
and
was dissatisfied
about.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a foreign product you would like to buy. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
4 paragraphs
360 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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