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Talk about an electronic device you want to buy. v.1

Talk about an electronic device you want to buy. v. 1
Talk about an electronic device you want to buy. You should say: What it is When you are planning to buy it How much it would cost you and explain why you want to buy it. Sample Answer: I have a personal fascination about the electronic devices and among my very personal belongings, the number of electronic devices forms the majority part. The need for latest electronic devices is never-ending and that is why I often feel to replace my old TV with a new one or want to purchase a new music system when I found it as a new arrival item in the market. One such electronic device that I would like to purchase is a washing machine. I have a washing machine at my home but it is more than 4 years old and I feel the need to buy a new one. The model that I have in mind would require a good amount of money and I am planning to buy it early next year. It would cost me around 1200 USD. Since this is a branded product the price might vary at the time I would purchase it. The washing machine that I currently have requires some manual works and I am planning to buy a new washing machine that would require very few manual works to have my laundry work done. The numbers of clothes that need washing have increased dramatically over the year and it has become cumbersome for me to do all those laundry works using the old one. Furthermore the old washing machine does not have any facility to dry the clothes and as a result, I have to take the burden to take all the dresses on the roof top and have them dried out in the sunlight. The rainy season sometimes makes it very difficult and that’s why I am planning to replace it with a new one that would facilitate me to dry out the clothes as well. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a tool or device that you often use. Describe something you often use at home. Describe device that you bought recently. Describe an electronic device you own. Describe something you want to purchase.
Talk about an
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electronic
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device
you
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want
to
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buy
. You should say: What it is When you are
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planning
to
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buy
it How much it would cost you and
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explain
why you
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want
to
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buy
it. Sample Answer:

I have a personal fascination about the
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electronic
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devices
and among my
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very
personal belongings, the number of
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electronic
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devices
forms the majority part. The need for latest
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electronic
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devices
is never-ending and
that is
why I
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often
feel to replace my
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old
TV with a
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new
one or
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want
to
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purchase
a
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new
music system when I found it as a
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new
arrival item in the market.

One such
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electronic
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device
that I would like to
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purchase
is a washing
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machine
. I have a washing
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machine
at my home
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but
it is more than 4 years
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old
and I feel the need to
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buy
a
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new
one. The model that I have in mind would require a
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good
amount of
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
money and
I am
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planning
to
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buy
it early
next
year. It would cost me around 1200 USD.
“Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
this is a branded product the price might vary at the time I would
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purchase
it.

The washing
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machine
that I
currently
have requires
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some
manual
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works and
I am
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planning
to
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buy
a
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new
washing
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machine
that would require
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very
few manual works to have my laundry
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work
done. The numbers of clothes that need washing have increased
dramatically
over the year and it has become cumbersome for me to do all those laundry works using the
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old
one.
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Furthermore
the
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old
washing
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machine
does not have any facility to dry the clothes and
as a result
, I
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have to
take the burden to take all the dresses on the roof top and have them dried out in the sunlight. The rainy season
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sometimes
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makes
it
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very
difficult and that’s why I am
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planning
to replace it with a
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new
one that would facilitate me to dry out the clothes as
well
. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
a tool or
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device
that you
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often
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
.
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Describe
something you
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often
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
at home.
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Describe
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device
that you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
recently.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
an
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electronic
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device
you
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own
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
something you
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want
to
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purchase
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
53Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS speaking Talk about an electronic device you want to buy. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
4 paragraphs
389 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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