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Describe an occasion when you received a good service from a company or shop. v.1

Describe an occasion when you received a good service from a company or shop. v. 1
Describe an occasion when you received a good service from a company or shop. You should say: what the service was when you received the service where you received the service and explain why you think it was a good service.
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Describe
an occasion when you received a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
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service
from a
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company
or shop. You should say: what the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
was when you received the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
where you received the
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service
and
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explain
why you
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think
it was a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe an occasion when you received a good service from a company or shop. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
1 paragraphs
41 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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